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12/2/2007 c1 Err.Me
OMG, that was so good! Well done!
12/1/2007 c1 11Noellen
Such a sad song that hits way too close to home.

"that you couldn’t see the tears

That wrote I love you on my face" I love these lines, so much win.
12/1/2007 c1 19Core Satiated
Halfway through this, I said to myself how awesome this would be to music...it had that certain flow of a song. You validated it at the end! It really tugged at my heart and I genuinely felt the passion in the lyrics.

Awesome job!
12/1/2007 c1 31buorin
Ah very nice. The repetitive words seem to emphasize the meaning of your poem. May I ask is this a song or a poem?

Anyway, at the start it was a bit rough to read as if the words are thrown together just to rhyme. However, later it became better .

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