12/3/2007 c1 73Senorita Diabla
So alliterate! X] I like it. Looks like you put some work into this one, what with the charming flow of words. Favorited =].
So alliterate! X] I like it. Looks like you put some work into this one, what with the charming flow of words. Favorited =].
12/2/2007 c1 165softer side of apples
I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS ESPECIALLY THE LINE THAT SAYS " A DREAM DREAMT, DISCARDED & DISCOVERED" THAT LINE WAS S OPOWERFUL TO ME...
I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS ESPECIALLY THE LINE THAT SAYS " A DREAM DREAMT, DISCARDED & DISCOVERED" THAT LINE WAS S OPOWERFUL TO ME...
12/2/2007 c1 10wayward-wordsmith
the contrasts and alliterations really catch your attention and force you to pay attention. i like it. thanks.
the contrasts and alliterations really catch your attention and force you to pay attention. i like it. thanks.