for A Bit Touched in the Mind8/5/2012 c21 RubyRed22
Holy crap?... What the hell is wrong with these people?! Heh heh... Now I'm laughing... No pun intended x2.
Holy crap?... What the hell is wrong with these people?! Heh heh... Now I'm laughing... No pun intended x2.
8/5/2012 c14 RubyRed22
I'm sorry to say that I totally saw that coming... However, I thought it would have been Mae finding out by reading her mind! Anyways... ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
I'm sorry to say that I totally saw that coming... However, I thought it would have been Mae finding out by reading her mind! Anyways... ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
5/16/2012 c23 
4R. Ficst
Absolutely loved it! Fantabulous work! Your voice is humorous and unique, and I loved your characters, their personalities, and their abilities. Great work with the plot. The pacing was almost spot on, I just felt that some of Mae's religious musings were snapped in and out of a little abruptly, so those sections could use a little more work to be integrated into the flow more smoothly. I'm excited about the sequel mentioned in your last author's note. I'll certainly be checking out your profile to see more of your work.
Great job, and thanks for posting! I thoroughly enjoyed the read!
4R. FicstAbsolutely loved it! Fantabulous work! Your voice is humorous and unique, and I loved your characters, their personalities, and their abilities. Great work with the plot. The pacing was almost spot on, I just felt that some of Mae's religious musings were snapped in and out of a little abruptly, so those sections could use a little more work to be integrated into the flow more smoothly. I'm excited about the sequel mentioned in your last author's note. I'll certainly be checking out your profile to see more of your work.
Great job, and thanks for posting! I thoroughly enjoyed the read!
3/27/2012 c8 AJ Garcia
My sister has the gift of decrement. She can feel people, but it's not something that she can use for her own pleasures; far from it. I know this guy who has the same gift and he is using it for himself and he hates it. The only way he can delude it is to get drunk. All my Sis has to do is ask God to make it stop and He does:) pretty cool if you ask me!
My sister has the gift of decrement. She can feel people, but it's not something that she can use for her own pleasures; far from it. I know this guy who has the same gift and he is using it for himself and he hates it. The only way he can delude it is to get drunk. All my Sis has to do is ask God to make it stop and He does:) pretty cool if you ask me!
9/17/2011 c23 4Dalilt
I loved this story. You managed to insert the supernatural in a natural way. It doesn't seem forced and it flows wel. Their powers weren't also the main focus and that's nice. I look forward to the sequel in order to learn more about all those small mysteries..
I only feel sorry for Minh..poor guy ..
4DaliltI loved this story. You managed to insert the supernatural in a natural way. It doesn't seem forced and it flows wel. Their powers weren't also the main focus and that's nice. I look forward to the sequel in order to learn more about all those small mysteries..
I only feel sorry for Minh..poor guy ..
6/24/2011 c23 1Candescence
ok, so this story. Not my favorite of what you written. Some parts I just barely skimmed over it. It sort of dragged and some things were left to be desired. I liked this story though. Even Doug. I think I like him better than Seth ;) We'll see what happens with the sequel
1Candescenceok, so this story. Not my favorite of what you written. Some parts I just barely skimmed over it. It sort of dragged and some things were left to be desired. I liked this story though. Even Doug. I think I like him better than Seth ;) We'll see what happens with the sequel