for A Bit Touched in the Mind6/29/2008 c18 
2iPod
Wait... That means... Drew...
WHAT?
YOU CANT JUST LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT!
AURGH!
2iPodWait... That means... Drew...
WHAT?
YOU CANT JUST LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT!
AURGH!
6/29/2008 c18 WriterGurl123
I don't get why her mother is doing this to her, I mean the girl is 18 years old, if she doesn't want to do something it should be her decision to do so. But, I think that parents are always going to want their children to be following their rules, so there is less danger out there for their kids. But, Mae can read people's minds, either way she's going to face danger.
Enough of my ranting!
I love it!
I don't get why her mother is doing this to her, I mean the girl is 18 years old, if she doesn't want to do something it should be her decision to do so. But, I think that parents are always going to want their children to be following their rules, so there is less danger out there for their kids. But, Mae can read people's minds, either way she's going to face danger.
Enough of my ranting!
I love it!
6/29/2008 c13 choc me
I'm still loving that story very much, but I didn't like Mae a lot here. She was a lil out of character what with being pushy and nosy ..she acted like she didnt really care too much etc..
I'm still loving that story very much, but I didn't like Mae a lot here. She was a lil out of character what with being pushy and nosy ..she acted like she didnt really care too much etc..
6/29/2008 c4 choc me
Hi! So far I'm really enjoying the story! I was thinking that maybe you could put the thoughts that Mae reads in italics or something like that. It'd be less confusing.
Hi! So far I'm really enjoying the story! I was thinking that maybe you could put the thoughts that Mae reads in italics or something like that. It'd be less confusing.
6/28/2008 c18 batzmaru
Guess I was right. Drew is up to no good...does that mean the story is ending soon?
Guess I was right. Drew is up to no good...does that mean the story is ending soon?
6/21/2008 c17 RioSamba
Everyone was very grumpy in this chap. I like Seth's mom and how calm she is, she's like the anti- version of Mae's mom.
For your new story, I like the girl who doubles as a super hero^_^
Everyone was very grumpy in this chap. I like Seth's mom and how calm she is, she's like the anti- version of Mae's mom.
For your new story, I like the girl who doubles as a super hero^_^
6/21/2008 c17 iPod
oh, crap. Seth is hot and i think that doug is the one hypnotizing her and has powers cause he knew where they were gonna be and.. i dunno, he's just kinda weird. xD *kills doug* Yay! Now Courtney is free, everyone happy! n.n
oh, crap. Seth is hot and i think that doug is the one hypnotizing her and has powers cause he knew where they were gonna be and.. i dunno, he's just kinda weird. xD *kills doug* Yay! Now Courtney is free, everyone happy! n.n
6/19/2008 c17 1Izzey
oh. it's getting interesting now! please update soon so i can find out what happens next.
1Izzeyoh. it's getting interesting now! please update soon so i can find out what happens next.
6/19/2008 c17 WriterGurl123
uh-oh! Her mother will not be happy with her. I just hope that she doesn't forbid her to see Seth.
uh-oh! Her mother will not be happy with her. I just hope that she doesn't forbid her to see Seth.
6/19/2008 c17 batzmaru
Oh...the plot thickens. I think that Doug must have the ability to read and control minds. So he's like a more powerful version of Mae, kind of like Magnento from X-Men. Maybe he was involved in the murder somehow...
Oh...the plot thickens. I think that Doug must have the ability to read and control minds. So he's like a more powerful version of Mae, kind of like Magnento from X-Men. Maybe he was involved in the murder somehow...
6/19/2008 c17 2sarahrules336
man seth has issues, i mean it's understandable, but still, boys fail at trusting. so my theory is that doug hypnotized courtney. i hope i'm right. :-) update soon!
2sarahrules336man seth has issues, i mean it's understandable, but still, boys fail at trusting. so my theory is that doug hypnotized courtney. i hope i'm right. :-) update soon!