
1/18/2011 c21 Margirli13
Okay, I know this story has been up for a while now, but it's my first time reading it, and I have to say it is AMAZING! I read so many books and stories that either completely ignore God, or worse, they are like your Mae's parents, zealous, and overbearing.
It is so nice to read a story with genuine, true faith in it, and one that explores the dilemmas to trying to figure out your own faith. I cannot say enough how much of a treat it is to read something like this. It's very tricky to include religion on a story, and you did it just exactly right.
Plus, that's not the whole focus of the book. I love the plot too. The special gifts of telepathy, and telekinesis, and the whole murder plot make it absolutely delicious, and I just have to say huge kudos for a story superbly-written.
I hope you send this to some publishers and try and get it officially published. I would buy it.
Okay, I know this story has been up for a while now, but it's my first time reading it, and I have to say it is AMAZING! I read so many books and stories that either completely ignore God, or worse, they are like your Mae's parents, zealous, and overbearing.
It is so nice to read a story with genuine, true faith in it, and one that explores the dilemmas to trying to figure out your own faith. I cannot say enough how much of a treat it is to read something like this. It's very tricky to include religion on a story, and you did it just exactly right.
Plus, that's not the whole focus of the book. I love the plot too. The special gifts of telepathy, and telekinesis, and the whole murder plot make it absolutely delicious, and I just have to say huge kudos for a story superbly-written.
I hope you send this to some publishers and try and get it officially published. I would buy it.
8/10/2010 c23
1Violet-Madness
I like this story a lot, especially the romance between Mae and Seth. However, I don't really think you wrapped up the thing with Mae's family completely, unless you're planning to continue with that thread in the next novel. Thumbs up!

I like this story a lot, especially the romance between Mae and Seth. However, I don't really think you wrapped up the thing with Mae's family completely, unless you're planning to continue with that thread in the next novel. Thumbs up!
8/10/2010 c21 Violet-Madness
I couldn't help but laugh at the scene with the pastor. Kudos to you for giving me the giggles!
I couldn't help but laugh at the scene with the pastor. Kudos to you for giving me the giggles!
8/10/2010 c20 Violet-Madness
Crap! Well, now at least I know who the killer is! I can't wait for the showdown that will happen next chapter between Mae and her mom and dad!
Crap! Well, now at least I know who the killer is! I can't wait for the showdown that will happen next chapter between Mae and her mom and dad!
8/10/2010 c18 Violet-Madness
Wow! And here I was thinking the cheating scumbag had something to do with it, whereas Drew . . . hmm. Well, I'll just have to keep reading, won't I?
Wow! And here I was thinking the cheating scumbag had something to do with it, whereas Drew . . . hmm. Well, I'll just have to keep reading, won't I?
8/10/2010 c16 Violet-Madness
Again, I'm glad I found this story complete. The Courtney-thought thing is mucho creepy, and I'm starting to wonder how Doug is involved in everything . . .
Again, I'm glad I found this story complete. The Courtney-thought thing is mucho creepy, and I'm starting to wonder how Doug is involved in everything . . .
8/10/2010 c15 Violet-Madness
The last sentence made me laugh, because it is so true. I don't think Courtney killed Tanya, but maybe she's covering for her ex, whom she still probably loves? Blame me for watching too many CSI reruns.
The last sentence made me laugh, because it is so true. I don't think Courtney killed Tanya, but maybe she's covering for her ex, whom she still probably loves? Blame me for watching too many CSI reruns.
8/10/2010 c14 Violet-Madness
Crap! I kinda saw that one coming, but not in this fashion! Dum dum dum . . . unless Courtney's bluffing? Hmm. I will read on.
Crap! I kinda saw that one coming, but not in this fashion! Dum dum dum . . . unless Courtney's bluffing? Hmm. I will read on.
8/10/2010 c13 Violet-Madness
Wow . . . that's one heck of a cliffie! P.S Seth's confession makes sense. The same thing pretty much happened to me but with school and grades.
Wow . . . that's one heck of a cliffie! P.S Seth's confession makes sense. The same thing pretty much happened to me but with school and grades.
8/10/2010 c12 Violet-Madness
Fluffy and excellent. I loved the dark touch with Seth's memories - who knew, hey? I'll have to check out your other stories after I finish this one.
Fluffy and excellent. I loved the dark touch with Seth's memories - who knew, hey? I'll have to check out your other stories after I finish this one.