for A Bit Touched in the Mind
18/5/2010 c9 Violet-Madness
I can't say I saw that one coming! So low, Brett . . . so low. And of course the kiss was so sweet! My heart just melted.
I can't say I saw that one coming! So low, Brett . . . so low. And of course the kiss was so sweet! My heart just melted.
8/5/2010 c8 Violet-Madness
No offense, but I skimmed most of this chapter. What can I say? I'm not Christian in the slightest, but I still enjoy this fic. And it is marked under 'spirituality' too, so I guess I should have seen it coming.
No offense, but I skimmed most of this chapter. What can I say? I'm not Christian in the slightest, but I still enjoy this fic. And it is marked under 'spirituality' too, so I guess I should have seen it coming.
8/5/2010 c6 Violet-Madness
Ooh, cliffie. Again with the aformentioned 'complete' relief. As secondary characters, I have to say I love the twins. They're quite hilarious, especially at 'purity class'. Is there even such a thing?
Ooh, cliffie. Again with the aformentioned 'complete' relief. As secondary characters, I have to say I love the twins. They're quite hilarious, especially at 'purity class'. Is there even such a thing?
8/5/2010 c5 Violet-Madness
I read your A/N and I'm glad that there's some separation between the thoughts and the text now (perhaps going back and changing them in previous chapters would prevent stupid reviews like mine . . .)I can't wait until the date! God, I sound like an idiot, but it's true. Thankfully, I stumbled upon this story in its entirety so there's no waiting!
I read your A/N and I'm glad that there's some separation between the thoughts and the text now (perhaps going back and changing them in previous chapters would prevent stupid reviews like mine . . .)I can't wait until the date! God, I sound like an idiot, but it's true. Thankfully, I stumbled upon this story in its entirety so there's no waiting!
8/5/2010 c3 Violet-Madness
I really found it funny how Mae continued to kid herself into thinking that she didn't like Seth. It's kinda hard to deny the sparks (and the fact that this story is under the 'Romance' category)
I really found it funny how Mae continued to kid herself into thinking that she didn't like Seth. It's kinda hard to deny the sparks (and the fact that this story is under the 'Romance' category)
8/5/2010 c2 Violet-Madness
Ah, if everything could be as awesome as e-cookies . . . or this story. Haha. I had to do that, sorry. Quick pointer - sometimes it was difficult for me to differentiate between Mae's thoughts and when she reads Seth's thoughts because there isn't a font change or italics. I know FictionPress is limited that way, but it would still be nice if I could distinguish between the two easier.
Ah, if everything could be as awesome as e-cookies . . . or this story. Haha. I had to do that, sorry. Quick pointer - sometimes it was difficult for me to differentiate between Mae's thoughts and when she reads Seth's thoughts because there isn't a font change or italics. I know FictionPress is limited that way, but it would still be nice if I could distinguish between the two easier.
8/5/2010 c1 Violet-Madness
I really like the angst and dislike between Mae and her mom - I'm a bit of a tension-lover. I also love Seth - he seems really cute. And mysterious . . . I'm pretty sure it wasn't a 'trick'. Hmm - well, I'll definitely read on . . .
I really like the angst and dislike between Mae and her mom - I'm a bit of a tension-lover. I also love Seth - he seems really cute. And mysterious . . . I'm pretty sure it wasn't a 'trick'. Hmm - well, I'll definitely read on . . .
7/27/2010 c14 stereos
HAH! see i had a feeling Courtney was the murderer
HAH! see i had a feeling Courtney was the murderer
7/5/2010 c23 maaarz
This was super awesome! I hope you do write a sequel because I am DYING to read more about Doug. =]
This was super awesome! I hope you do write a sequel because I am DYING to read more about Doug. =]
5/21/2010 c23 Julie G
aw!no more mae 4 the sequal!th@ wont b as MUCH fun!Cud we do sumthin from the twins pov?Maybe they hav powers 2 but they havnt discovered or undeveloped enough to be noticeable!
aw!no more mae 4 the sequal!th@ wont b as MUCH fun!Cud we do sumthin from the twins pov?Maybe they hav powers 2 but they havnt discovered or undeveloped enough to be noticeable!
5/21/2010 c22 Julie G
I'm so gonna do NaNoWriMo!I googled it n it looks awesome!I'm going to tell my cousin about it! She's written like,a dozen novels n screenplays,though.Go 2 jesserichardson. to se her series.
I'm so gonna do NaNoWriMo!I googled it n it looks awesome!I'm going to tell my cousin about it! She's written like,a dozen novels n screenplays,though.Go 2 jesserichardson. to se her series.