for She Yodeled Back12/24/2007 c1 
91fairytale failure
It is great how you go back to the idea of moving mountains, that you introduced in the first stanza, at the end of the poem. So much in this poem is inter-connected, like moving mountains to the Alps to...everything; I guess it must have been deeply inspired. I didn't like the first few lines as much of the rest of the poem, but as it went on it seemed to become steadily better.
91fairytale failureIt is great how you go back to the idea of moving mountains, that you introduced in the first stanza, at the end of the poem. So much in this poem is inter-connected, like moving mountains to the Alps to...everything; I guess it must have been deeply inspired. I didn't like the first few lines as much of the rest of the poem, but as it went on it seemed to become steadily better.