
12/11/2007 c1 twyx
I think it would have been better if you did it like the first paragragh/thing.. Like one word only in the last sentence of every paragraph.
I think it would have been better if you did it like the first paragragh/thing.. Like one word only in the last sentence of every paragraph.
12/7/2007 c1
11xDancingintheRainx
Very warm and sweet. I like Christmas poems because its like you get to know the author and see what their Christmas traditions are. Its pretty cool. I like the imagery of this piece. Very well written. Nicely done.

Very warm and sweet. I like Christmas poems because its like you get to know the author and see what their Christmas traditions are. Its pretty cool. I like the imagery of this piece. Very well written. Nicely done.