
12/13/2007 c1
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i liike this
repeating the line
he's not dead, he's just gone was
a really good idea and my favorite part of this poem was the
seventh stanza

i liike this
repeating the line
he's not dead, he's just gone was
a really good idea and my favorite part of this poem was the
seventh stanza
12/8/2007 c1
332smile for the sunshine
beautifully written. i loved it. truly.
the repetition of "he's not dead, he's just gone." worked lovely. i thought so, anyway.
a favorite. kudos. cheers to an amazing job.
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beautifully written. i loved it. truly.
the repetition of "he's not dead, he's just gone." worked lovely. i thought so, anyway.
a favorite. kudos. cheers to an amazing job.
(add to favorite story list && C2)