for Decision Time, Peanut12/13/2017 c1 Penelope Applegate
For a one shot that you pulled out of your bum just because, I think it's pretty great. It got me tied up emotionally, and I couldn't wait to see how it ended.
For a one shot that you pulled out of your bum just because, I think it's pretty great. It got me tied up emotionally, and I couldn't wait to see how it ended.
11/9/2015 c1 annayh44
God forbid this suitation was something that no one wants to be,,,poor Davey I really do feel bad for him
God forbid this suitation was something that no one wants to be,,,poor Davey I really do feel bad for him
4/9/2015 c1 IStillCan'tLogin
I couldn't find a reason to like this. I mean, I'm just not one for cheating and betrayal by infidelity.
I cringed every time I though of this girl and Mac together, and how Davey would react.
Dude got cheated on and dumped for his brother on his birthday.
That's just so wrong.
I couldn't find a reason to like this. I mean, I'm just not one for cheating and betrayal by infidelity.
I cringed every time I though of this girl and Mac together, and how Davey would react.
Dude got cheated on and dumped for his brother on his birthday.
That's just so wrong.
7/2/2014 c1 Guest
Okay, i really don't feel sorry for her.
She's sooo whorish! I can't believe she went between two brothers like that!
What a slut!
Okay, i really don't feel sorry for her.
She's sooo whorish! I can't believe she went between two brothers like that!
What a slut!
6/11/2014 c1 Caro
Incredibleeeeeeeeee, i absolutely loooooooooove Mac.
Incredibleeeeeeeeee, i absolutely loooooooooove Mac.
5/15/2014 c1 Guest
Whyy do people always feel the need to cheat first and then break up?
Whyy do people always feel the need to cheat first and then break up?
4/8/2014 c1 amessageinabottle
I'm not quite sure what to make of this story... Don't get me wrong I love your writing its just I don't like how Evie handled the whole situation... It was truly messed up. I'm not a fan of cheating stories and I think Evie should have broken up along time with her boyfriend (lol I can't remember his name) and the whole going after his brother - mac - was a bit too much... Even through they are cute togeather lol if the situation was different I'd like the story a lot more... But saying that I would love to read what happened next especially the parents reaction lol. I do like your story it's just the situation they got themselves into was super messed up.
I'm not quite sure what to make of this story... Don't get me wrong I love your writing its just I don't like how Evie handled the whole situation... It was truly messed up. I'm not a fan of cheating stories and I think Evie should have broken up along time with her boyfriend (lol I can't remember his name) and the whole going after his brother - mac - was a bit too much... Even through they are cute togeather lol if the situation was different I'd like the story a lot more... But saying that I would love to read what happened next especially the parents reaction lol. I do like your story it's just the situation they got themselves into was super messed up.
3/19/2014 c1 
75AlysonSerenaStone
I really enjoyed reading this! I thought your characters were well written for a one shot. Plus, I like the idea of having her chose between brothers-I really didn't see that one coming. Anyway, great work as always!
75AlysonSerenaStoneI really enjoyed reading this! I thought your characters were well written for a one shot. Plus, I like the idea of having her chose between brothers-I really didn't see that one coming. Anyway, great work as always!
12/15/2013 c1 2ilikedaisychains
AW. I thoroughly enjoyed this, you're an amazing author and you capture your character's emotions beautifully! :-)
2ilikedaisychainsAW. I thoroughly enjoyed this, you're an amazing author and you capture your character's emotions beautifully! :-)
11/29/2013 c1 Guest
This was fantastic! Loved it from start to end! That ending was brilliant and left me feeling fireworks :)
This was fantastic! Loved it from start to end! That ending was brilliant and left me feeling fireworks :)
11/27/2013 c1 Guest
This was really, really fantastic, from start to end. Great job.
This was really, really fantastic, from start to end. Great job.
10/13/2013 c1 Midnight Phantomhive
That was...
How do I put it?
Amazing? Wonderful? I don't know.
All I know is, I stayed up last night just to finish your one shot. :')
I love every part of it. xD
Hope to read more stories from you in the future!
That was...
How do I put it?
Amazing? Wonderful? I don't know.
All I know is, I stayed up last night just to finish your one shot. :')
I love every part of it. xD
Hope to read more stories from you in the future!
6/26/2013 c1 Lou
Hey Jessie
My god you're an awesome writer!
(Mac's a bit of an arse though, it was his brother he happily shafted). Now hurry up and finish the Do Gooder :-)
Hey Jessie
My god you're an awesome writer!
(Mac's a bit of an arse though, it was his brother he happily shafted). Now hurry up and finish the Do Gooder :-)