for Decision Time, Peanut12/16/2007 c1 
2simplicity is complex
meh, it's the love.
you made me feel.. everything at the same time.
rah.
2simplicity is complexmeh, it's the love.
you made me feel.. everything at the same time.
rah.
12/13/2007 c1 litjunkie
I loved it. mission successfully completed in my opinion, i'm such a sucker for this genre ;O)
I loved it. mission successfully completed in my opinion, i'm such a sucker for this genre ;O)
12/10/2007 c1 3Colie Rae
It was one of those stories that made my stomach turn to a a jumbled pile of knots. It was a story that was gripping and I felt like I was there, feeling her pain and anguish as if it were my own. I can't say I particularily enjoyed the storyline but the way you wrote it was amazing. I loved the description of the storm especially.
3Colie RaeIt was one of those stories that made my stomach turn to a a jumbled pile of knots. It was a story that was gripping and I felt like I was there, feeling her pain and anguish as if it were my own. I can't say I particularily enjoyed the storyline but the way you wrote it was amazing. I loved the description of the storm especially.
12/10/2007 c1 Alenor
aw, that situation sucks for all three of them. i'd hate that! it was a good oneshot though ~ Alenor.
aw, that situation sucks for all three of them. i'd hate that! it was a good oneshot though ~ Alenor.
12/10/2007 c1 2Spangled Boots
um, wow. There's so many wonderful things to say about this story and yet having just read through it and feeling like i've been on an emotional rollercoaster with them, i cant quite find the words to express them. Truly brilliant.
2Spangled Bootsum, wow. There's so many wonderful things to say about this story and yet having just read through it and feeling like i've been on an emotional rollercoaster with them, i cant quite find the words to express them. Truly brilliant.
12/10/2007 c1 3klleongmsia
Great One Shot...
If it were me.. I don't even think I can make a decision at all..
I probably be the one running away and moving away..
3klleongmsiaGreat One Shot...
If it were me.. I don't even think I can make a decision at all..
I probably be the one running away and moving away..
12/9/2007 c1 asianbabe92
well let me just say.
THIS WAS AMAZING.
i really liked it
and even though its not like what you usually write,
you did a really great job of writing it.
it evoked emotion in all the right places
AND came with a happy(ish) ending.
i think if you ever write a story with this type of genre.
it would be absolutely fantastic and i would not hesitate in reading it.
well let me just say.
THIS WAS AMAZING.
i really liked it
and even though its not like what you usually write,
you did a really great job of writing it.
it evoked emotion in all the right places
AND came with a happy(ish) ending.
i think if you ever write a story with this type of genre.
it would be absolutely fantastic and i would not hesitate in reading it.
12/9/2007 c1 5Georgia Mud Fudge
i loved it.
ive been waiting for you to update your other stories but this just made up for all the time i waited.
i feel bad for davey but i like mac.
5Georgia Mud Fudgei loved it.
ive been waiting for you to update your other stories but this just made up for all the time i waited.
i feel bad for davey but i like mac.
12/9/2007 c1 snow blossoms
gwah this is really good. xD i dig the heated passion/angst/romance! my only qualm is that in Mac's dialog, "Mac snorted, 'You think I have any answers for you? I thought it was sorted. I left home and,'" you misspelled "sordid." Otherwise, sexy fantastic story!
gwah this is really good. xD i dig the heated passion/angst/romance! my only qualm is that in Mac's dialog, "Mac snorted, 'You think I have any answers for you? I thought it was sorted. I left home and,'" you misspelled "sordid." Otherwise, sexy fantastic story!
12/9/2007 c1 blubbfreak
I normally don't like the whole "first one then the other brother" stuff, but you really did a great job.
I normally don't like the whole "first one then the other brother" stuff, but you really did a great job.
12/9/2007 c1 41AbbeyEileen
A few comments:
It should be "Decision time, Peanut", emphasis on that comma.
There are a couple places where you use exclamation points where a period will work just fine.
The bulk of the story is good, even if it is long, but there are a few parts where it drags. She keeps going in circles with Mac and the scene with his parents is just confusing.
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41AbbeyEileenA few comments:
It should be "Decision time, Peanut", emphasis on that comma.
There are a couple places where you use exclamation points where a period will work just fine.
The bulk of the story is good, even if it is long, but there are a few parts where it drags. She keeps going in circles with Mac and the scene with his parents is just confusing.
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