for Decision Time, Peanut4/14/2012 c1 flawlessimperfectionsx
I absolutely love this story! It's so well-written and I could practically feel the emotions of Evie and Mac. Still, I feel pretty bad for Davey ):
I absolutely love this story! It's so well-written and I could practically feel the emotions of Evie and Mac. Still, I feel pretty bad for Davey ):
3/23/2012 c1 
2Hecate's Diamon
I've yet to read a story of yours that I don't love to death! I think this one would have made an awesome full length story, though, starting when she was introduced to Mac. It would have been great! And Mac and Evie reminded me of Charlie and Max in Lighthouse Charlie, which I think is my favourite one so far! Awesome stuff though, really!
2Hecate's DiamonI've yet to read a story of yours that I don't love to death! I think this one would have made an awesome full length story, though, starting when she was introduced to Mac. It would have been great! And Mac and Evie reminded me of Charlie and Max in Lighthouse Charlie, which I think is my favourite one so far! Awesome stuff though, really!
1/22/2012 c1 11effection
I love this story so much. Really. Even though I hate Evie and although Mac has an incredibly sexy vibe, I find his character to be pretty despicable. I think it's amazing how even though I think your main characters are essentially terrible people, I still really love this story. It's well-written and their chemistry is so palpable. Awesome job!
11effectionI love this story so much. Really. Even though I hate Evie and although Mac has an incredibly sexy vibe, I find his character to be pretty despicable. I think it's amazing how even though I think your main characters are essentially terrible people, I still really love this story. It's well-written and their chemistry is so palpable. Awesome job!
11/15/2011 c1 21HiHelloMisterBear
I actually had tears in my eyes near the end.
Whats wrong with you? What is with all the sadness then happiness but tears everywhere?
21HiHelloMisterBearI actually had tears in my eyes near the end.
Whats wrong with you? What is with all the sadness then happiness but tears everywhere?
10/10/2011 c1 1CrazyCinderellaGirl
I loved it, it was so...authentic! :D
I see you used the term 'SledgeHammer' and it made me think of Jack from So Much to Learn! I see you like the word 'hammer!'
Keep writing! :D
1CrazyCinderellaGirlI loved it, it was so...authentic! :D
I see you used the term 'SledgeHammer' and it made me think of Jack from So Much to Learn! I see you like the word 'hammer!'
Keep writing! :D
7/18/2011 c1 3SunaMarki
I really liked it. And to me it seemed to go pretty smoothly, I like the way it's set up because it believable. Something that could happen to anyone.
3SunaMarkiI really liked it. And to me it seemed to go pretty smoothly, I like the way it's set up because it believable. Something that could happen to anyone.
6/22/2011 c1 spUNkyORanGE
I love your work. What I like about this story is that is a story all on its own with a beginning and an end but it could also be a bigger story too. You have a way with words. No on to reading something else you wrote :)
I love your work. What I like about this story is that is a story all on its own with a beginning and an end but it could also be a bigger story too. You have a way with words. No on to reading something else you wrote :)
5/30/2011 c1 2fairydustillusion
whoaa. i didn't even know it was possible to pack so much emotion into a one shot..
2fairydustillusionwhoaa. i didn't even know it was possible to pack so much emotion into a one shot..
3/19/2011 c1 2elma
that was kind of tragic. I'm... I'm not sure how I feel about it. Because like, you want her to go with Mac, right? But you know she's totally whipped her boyfriend. So if you were her boyfriend's friend, you'd hate her, right? As their parents you might hate her. Are her actions justifiable? Imagine how family get togethers will be in the future! :( how awful!
It was good. I kind of liked how you didn't use direct speech for the last confrontation between her and her boyfriend. It would've felt like too much dialogue.. I'm pretty torn about this LOL , wasn't there any other way? Where nobody could get hurt? I feel like there should be, but I'm not sure if there is actually. Wow, was this story meant to provoke so much thought? Hahaha. Good job on the writing :)
2elmathat was kind of tragic. I'm... I'm not sure how I feel about it. Because like, you want her to go with Mac, right? But you know she's totally whipped her boyfriend. So if you were her boyfriend's friend, you'd hate her, right? As their parents you might hate her. Are her actions justifiable? Imagine how family get togethers will be in the future! :( how awful!
It was good. I kind of liked how you didn't use direct speech for the last confrontation between her and her boyfriend. It would've felt like too much dialogue.. I'm pretty torn about this LOL , wasn't there any other way? Where nobody could get hurt? I feel like there should be, but I'm not sure if there is actually. Wow, was this story meant to provoke so much thought? Hahaha. Good job on the writing :)
3/14/2011 c1 Jill
I absolutely love this story. I've read a lot of stories on here, but yours is my all time favorite oneshot. You did a great job, I would love to read more of these characters!
I absolutely love this story. I've read a lot of stories on here, but yours is my all time favorite oneshot. You did a great job, I would love to read more of these characters!