for Crumpled Cars12/31/2007 c1 Julius Gillian
This reminds me of all the action/adventure movies I've ever watched. Cool. Dancing flames.
This reminds me of all the action/adventure movies I've ever watched. Cool. Dancing flames.
12/9/2007 c1 
30Honey Nut Loop and m-j
Dancing is a very apt word. After all flames are beautiful even whilst deadly.
30Honey Nut Loop and m-jDancing is a very apt word. After all flames are beautiful even whilst deadly.
12/9/2007 c1 170MallowsWins
I've never seen a haiku about a car crash, so you get kudos for that. Also, this is very well written. Great work.
Peace, Daze
170MallowsWinsI've never seen a haiku about a car crash, so you get kudos for that. Also, this is very well written. Great work.
Peace, Daze
12/9/2007 c1 11xDancingintheRainx
I really like the ending. Very creative. The imagery is really clear too. Well done.
11xDancingintheRainxI really like the ending. Very creative. The imagery is really clear too. Well done.