
12/15/2007 c1 Thracian
Nicely written. Even though it's December, I haven't read any christmas stories on here yet...this is a first actually. I loved the dialogue, it was raw and very believable. The descriptions were very to-the-point...Shit-eating grin, I've seen that many times in person, nicely done. Good job.
Nicely written. Even though it's December, I haven't read any christmas stories on here yet...this is a first actually. I loved the dialogue, it was raw and very believable. The descriptions were very to-the-point...Shit-eating grin, I've seen that many times in person, nicely done. Good job.