for If You Don't, Don't12/25/2008 c12 
30Pretty Rad
Freaking GAH
I so would have read this yesterday
Or the day you updated
But I've been distracted with all the holiday crap going on.
And even though xmas is practically over,
i'm still not getting a break
My aunt's getting married tomorrow and then on Saturday it's my grandparent's 50th anniversery party
fun fun
meh
anyway...
I WANT RYAN AND MILES TOGETHER!
N O W !
It's so aggravating to see them argue with each other
Especially when it's so obvious Ryan wants Miles and vise versa.
They both need to make up, hug, kiss and possibly a little more. ;D
This was a good chap.
can't wait for the next update!
30Pretty RadFreaking GAH
I so would have read this yesterday
Or the day you updated
But I've been distracted with all the holiday crap going on.
And even though xmas is practically over,
i'm still not getting a break
My aunt's getting married tomorrow and then on Saturday it's my grandparent's 50th anniversery party
fun fun
meh
anyway...
I WANT RYAN AND MILES TOGETHER!
N O W !
It's so aggravating to see them argue with each other
Especially when it's so obvious Ryan wants Miles and vise versa.
They both need to make up, hug, kiss and possibly a little more. ;D
This was a good chap.
can't wait for the next update!
12/24/2008 c12 gothicHobbit08
Yay, you're on winter break... so write more chapters! And everyone else is on winter break... so we can read lots of new chapters! so... no more cliffhangers! Keep writing, already!
Yay, you're on winter break... so write more chapters! And everyone else is on winter break... so we can read lots of new chapters! so... no more cliffhangers! Keep writing, already!
12/23/2008 c12 17JtheChosen1
excellent work! so much tension and drama! keep up the great work, can't wait for the next chapter!
17JtheChosen1excellent work! so much tension and drama! keep up the great work, can't wait for the next chapter!
12/23/2008 c12 1LimeSmoothie
ryan and miles need to hook up soon! it's so tense and i hate when they fight :(
1LimeSmoothieryan and miles need to hook up soon! it's so tense and i hate when they fight :(
12/5/2008 c11 17JtheChosen1
completely badass story so far! keep up the awesome job! i'm not gonna lie, i can't wait until Miles and Ryan meet Zac, thats going to b interesting!
17JtheChosen1completely badass story so far! keep up the awesome job! i'm not gonna lie, i can't wait until Miles and Ryan meet Zac, thats going to b interesting!
11/28/2008 c11 23firestar267
:o Miles that was a low blow!
This was great, as usual :) Made my day you updating did!
23firestar267:o Miles that was a low blow!
This was great, as usual :) Made my day you updating did!
11/26/2008 c10 1LaylaLivesLoosely
I really like this story and its prequel, and I'm rooting for Miles and Ryan. Hope to see more!
1LaylaLivesLooselyI really like this story and its prequel, and I'm rooting for Miles and Ryan. Hope to see more!
11/9/2008 c10 wtfwaswrongwithteenme
This story is one of my favorite storys on fiction press and the cliff hanger is really making me curious at that I think it's haunting me=P
This story is one of my favorite storys on fiction press and the cliff hanger is really making me curious at that I think it's haunting me=P
11/2/2008 c10 iCorpseGrinder
Wow I've been waiting so long for an update and it's here and i love it...
But i was sad because i was so happy that i read it to fast and it's over
I hope you get all your work done and update soon.
Wow I've been waiting so long for an update and it's here and i love it...
But i was sad because i was so happy that i read it to fast and it's over
I hope you get all your work done and update soon.
10/29/2008 c10 Lawanna
A great story. I can't wait for the next chapter. You really need to slap Ryan upside his head and tell him to snap out of it.
A great story. I can't wait for the next chapter. You really need to slap Ryan upside his head and tell him to snap out of it.
10/26/2008 c1 PTVetc
This is turning out really well.
Good chapter. Keep it up.
This is turning out really well.
Good chapter. Keep it up.
10/20/2008 c10 10QueenCasey
Oh my gosh. This story got just about ten times more interesting. Seriously, I totally just got my interest peaked again! So update! Soon! Please! Please!
10QueenCaseyOh my gosh. This story got just about ten times more interesting. Seriously, I totally just got my interest peaked again! So update! Soon! Please! Please!