for Swimming in the River Of Hope12/17/2007 c1 
1Gemma Lovell
You're so deep. I love this. There was one little tiny problem I noticed-at the end of "The Last Remaining Days", you forgot an 'o' in choose, which was written as "chose". Other than that you did a really fabulous job! This is one of the best pieces you've written yet, in my opinion. Great job!
Love,
Gemma
1Gemma LovellYou're so deep. I love this. There was one little tiny problem I noticed-at the end of "The Last Remaining Days", you forgot an 'o' in choose, which was written as "chose". Other than that you did a really fabulous job! This is one of the best pieces you've written yet, in my opinion. Great job!
Love,
Gemma
12/13/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Good piece. I like the title. The poems flow well. Nice work.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrGood piece. I like the title. The poems flow well. Nice work.
~Twilight Starr~
12/11/2007 c1 3Prieda Solo
very nice. My favourite thing is the way you frame it so wonderfully with the river. The ending is so happy and lovely (I'm been reading a lot of angst recently, so this was like sunshine).
Last remaining days was probably my least favourite. It didn't flow so well as the others. But overall this was very good.
Prieda
=D
3Prieda Solovery nice. My favourite thing is the way you frame it so wonderfully with the river. The ending is so happy and lovely (I'm been reading a lot of angst recently, so this was like sunshine).
Last remaining days was probably my least favourite. It didn't flow so well as the others. But overall this was very good.
Prieda
=D