for Crossing the Line11/8/2015 c10 Guest
hey i read all of the parts branded and crossing the line i love it so so much why did you not finish i am so upset you have a lot of sarcasm in the fics i know its been 7 years since then but please please finish the story please
hey i read all of the parts branded and crossing the line i love it so so much why did you not finish i am so upset you have a lot of sarcasm in the fics i know its been 7 years since then but please please finish the story please
4/30/2015 c10 Alice
god i m really fed up of reading half stories ... why can't u guys at least complete the story before leaving... no offense but u can't leave the story at suspense... it kind of suck... also because... alex is trapped between two guys... i want to know with whom she ends... UPDATE SOON... it's been 7 yrs...
god i m really fed up of reading half stories ... why can't u guys at least complete the story before leaving... no offense but u can't leave the story at suspense... it kind of suck... also because... alex is trapped between two guys... i want to know with whom she ends... UPDATE SOON... it's been 7 yrs...
7/27/2014 c3 ajashire1
I read some reviews for your story and... now I just can't finish it. I like this story to much to go on reading it knowing there won't be an ending. It was a fun ride and to me this story will just have to be the one that got away...
I read some reviews for your story and... now I just can't finish it. I like this story to much to go on reading it knowing there won't be an ending. It was a fun ride and to me this story will just have to be the one that got away...
12/21/2013 c10 
2Lauren Stargazer
First off, I want to say that all the stories in this series of yours have been really interesting! Ever since I stumbled upon the first story, I've been spending my free time reading everything up to this point. I'm not a huge fan of love triangles, either, but that didn't stop me from reading. I do like Zane more as a love interest more, though, so I'm glad the love triangle thing is over.
Secondly, I have mixed feelings about Crossing the Line. I've enjoy it completely, but the last time you updated was over five years ago and you left your readers hanging in a horrible spot. It's hard to pick up a project after that long and your writing style and tastes will probably be different. Still, there's a little part of me that is holding out that you'll take a break from your non-fictionpress projects and give us some kind of closure (and another part of me just wants to read your non-fictionpress projects).
Let's face it, you've been on a fictionpress hiatus. Maybe this is permanent. I shouldn't get my hopes up too much. Do you even read these reviews?
I hope that whatever you are doing, you keep up the great work!
2Lauren StargazerFirst off, I want to say that all the stories in this series of yours have been really interesting! Ever since I stumbled upon the first story, I've been spending my free time reading everything up to this point. I'm not a huge fan of love triangles, either, but that didn't stop me from reading. I do like Zane more as a love interest more, though, so I'm glad the love triangle thing is over.
Secondly, I have mixed feelings about Crossing the Line. I've enjoy it completely, but the last time you updated was over five years ago and you left your readers hanging in a horrible spot. It's hard to pick up a project after that long and your writing style and tastes will probably be different. Still, there's a little part of me that is holding out that you'll take a break from your non-fictionpress projects and give us some kind of closure (and another part of me just wants to read your non-fictionpress projects).
Let's face it, you've been on a fictionpress hiatus. Maybe this is permanent. I shouldn't get my hopes up too much. Do you even read these reviews?
I hope that whatever you are doing, you keep up the great work!
8/22/2013 c10 11The Undecisive Thinker
I can't believe you ended it there...
HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO US?!
11The Undecisive ThinkerI can't believe you ended it there...
HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO US?!
8/22/2013 c1 The Undecisive Thinker
So I don't know if I should even bother starting this seeing as you won't finish it...but I guess I'll take what I can get
So I don't know if I should even bother starting this seeing as you won't finish it...but I guess I'll take what I can get
4/12/2013 c10 Lauren
I'm really sad that you stopped writing these. I know it's been five years, and it's probably tough to get back into a story after so long; but if you ever get to a point where you feel like writing more, I'm sure I'm not the only one who would be thrilled.
I'm really sad that you stopped writing these. I know it's been five years, and it's probably tough to get back into a story after so long; but if you ever get to a point where you feel like writing more, I'm sure I'm not the only one who would be thrilled.
11/29/2011 c10 lilmissrainbow10
Hi Stilled Heart! I just read The Vampires Half Moon, Branded and Crossing the Line, and I REALLY loved them. But, um... I really want to know the rest of the story, cause it's not finished yet is it?
I love your characters so much! Although I do think that Ty and Alex should be together, and Natalie and Zane should be together (I mean, she's waited long enough right?). I have a feeling that you're going to make Ty and Natalie be together. The baby werewolves sound soooo cute! I want to play with one!
Well, I hope you update soon,
lilmissrainbow10
Hi Stilled Heart! I just read The Vampires Half Moon, Branded and Crossing the Line, and I REALLY loved them. But, um... I really want to know the rest of the story, cause it's not finished yet is it?
I love your characters so much! Although I do think that Ty and Alex should be together, and Natalie and Zane should be together (I mean, she's waited long enough right?). I have a feeling that you're going to make Ty and Natalie be together. The baby werewolves sound soooo cute! I want to play with one!
Well, I hope you update soon,
lilmissrainbow10
8/8/2011 c9 2BebeEllis
i kinda hate and love you right now. HOW CAN U LEAVE IT LIKE THIS? AND AT AN IMPORTANT CHANGE OF PLOT? ARGG THIS IS MOST DEFINETLY A HIATUS! 3years... omg i wanna know what happens so badly . guess ill just have to daydream
2BebeEllisi kinda hate and love you right now. HOW CAN U LEAVE IT LIKE THIS? AND AT AN IMPORTANT CHANGE OF PLOT? ARGG THIS IS MOST DEFINETLY A HIATUS! 3years... omg i wanna know what happens so badly . guess ill just have to daydream
8/20/2010 c1 lovelytimes
I finished branded but I'm very reluctant to continue the tale knowing it isn't complete. I'm already distraught enough without reading the third installment. Haha, well it was really a good read. Awfully cliche I must admit, but entertaining as well as addicting.
I finished branded but I'm very reluctant to continue the tale knowing it isn't complete. I'm already distraught enough without reading the third installment. Haha, well it was really a good read. Awfully cliche I must admit, but entertaining as well as addicting.
8/19/2010 c10 Depressed
I am utterly and entirely depressed that you have opted to leave this creation incomplete.
I am utterly and entirely depressed that you have opted to leave this creation incomplete.
7/23/2010 c10 Australian reader
I really like this story. I hope that you are going to finish it. It just stops in the middle and i'm sure here are a lot of people out who would like to know what happens.
I really like this story. I hope that you are going to finish it. It just stops in the middle and i'm sure here are a lot of people out who would like to know what happens.
6/30/2010 c9 5Skylene
I hope you don't think i'm being bitchy but where's the rest of the story you CAN NOT leave it hanging like that...
5SkyleneI hope you don't think i'm being bitchy but where's the rest of the story you CAN NOT leave it hanging like that...
6/14/2010 c10 skylene
oh comeon you cannot leave us hanging like that please write more :)
oh comeon you cannot leave us hanging like that please write more :)