for The Thin Line4/19/2015 c20 Anonymous
Ludivine dying is deus ex machina. Not cool. Shows lack of creativity.
Ludivine dying is deus ex machina. Not cool. Shows lack of creativity.
1/31/2014 c9 Miho
So I have a question. More rather I have a few questions. Can these vampires have children? and if they do are the children born as vampires or humans? How does that work with the whole "dead vampire body" thing? Anyway I was just wondering.
So I have a question. More rather I have a few questions. Can these vampires have children? and if they do are the children born as vampires or humans? How does that work with the whole "dead vampire body" thing? Anyway I was just wondering.
12/18/2013 c15 Guest
You made Marina kinda a slut, blowing all her boyfriends after saying she's never done anything with a boy, and now I find out that not only does he have to turn her asap, but once he does, she can't have children? Man, screw this, I am O-U-T.
You made Marina kinda a slut, blowing all her boyfriends after saying she's never done anything with a boy, and now I find out that not only does he have to turn her asap, but once he does, she can't have children? Man, screw this, I am O-U-T.
12/18/2013 c14 Guest
You said earlier on in the story she had never done anything with a boy, and now she's given blowjobs to more than one? Come on, man, make up your mind.
You said earlier on in the story she had never done anything with a boy, and now she's given blowjobs to more than one? Come on, man, make up your mind.
6/25/2013 c24 jennielove
Absolutely amazing story! i loved it soo much. all of the characters are great. i couldn't stop reading it.. keep writing!
Absolutely amazing story! i loved it soo much. all of the characters are great. i couldn't stop reading it.. keep writing!
10/23/2012 c23 heal me forever
fuck dis was beautiful tristain was damn damn damn awesum even she ...i even loved d other 2 ...gng to d sequel now :)
fuck dis was beautiful tristain was damn damn damn awesum even she ...i even loved d other 2 ...gng to d sequel now :)
8/5/2011 c26 leavemeialone
This is quite enjoyable. I love seeing the strong connection and love that the two have for each other. Well, I guess I really enjoy seeing Tristian caring so much about her. The way he feels about her and how she makes him so happy is something that I envy and hope to have one day. I am glad that they have gone so much together.
This is quite enjoyable. I love seeing the strong connection and love that the two have for each other. Well, I guess I really enjoy seeing Tristian caring so much about her. The way he feels about her and how she makes him so happy is something that I envy and hope to have one day. I am glad that they have gone so much together.
5/11/2011 c3 CrazyInAGoodWay
if you ever edit this and republish it, you probably meant not understand me but are we clear? because otherwise crystal doesnt make sense haha :)
if you ever edit this and republish it, you probably meant not understand me but are we clear? because otherwise crystal doesnt make sense haha :)
3/23/2011 c23 
1Roka-San
Ehehe I absolutely loved this. I wasn't expecting to be so consumed by another story, really. I was browsing looking for some inspiration for my own story, but this one really grabbed me. I'm on to the others now.
Amazing work :3
1Roka-SanEhehe I absolutely loved this. I wasn't expecting to be so consumed by another story, really. I was browsing looking for some inspiration for my own story, but this one really grabbed me. I'm on to the others now.
Amazing work :3
2/4/2011 c14 MuffinsRoxSox
Oh my gosh. I just realized that I haven't reviewed yet. This is really interesting. It's going a bit fast though... Well, whatever. :)
Oh my gosh. I just realized that I haven't reviewed yet. This is really interesting. It's going a bit fast though... Well, whatever. :)
1/1/2011 c2 too-cool-4-ya
This is the first of your stories that I have read and so far I like it. Just wondering though when she says "what do you care?" is it supposed to be what or why? English is not my first language but I wasn't sure. Thought you might want to know. Other than that it's great.
This is the first of your stories that I have read and so far I like it. Just wondering though when she says "what do you care?" is it supposed to be what or why? English is not my first language but I wasn't sure. Thought you might want to know. Other than that it's great.