for Afraid of the Dark11/10/2008 c1 
17daughterofmusic
Loved it. This is a description of my every night, too... I am a WIMP when it comes to sleeping, in the basement, alone, midnight, and my house is kinda creaky. Plus right after I watch a scary movie, in which the killer comes down the stairs, into the bedroom, and attacks the poor innocent girl.
Sheesh! Who ARE we?
:D
~Music
17daughterofmusicLoved it. This is a description of my every night, too... I am a WIMP when it comes to sleeping, in the basement, alone, midnight, and my house is kinda creaky. Plus right after I watch a scary movie, in which the killer comes down the stairs, into the bedroom, and attacks the poor innocent girl.
Sheesh! Who ARE we?
:D
~Music
3/6/2008 c1 chocolate roses
nice poem!
nice poem!
12/14/2007 c1 pangur
'Hours pass like Minutes'
I've read that phrase before, therefor you do not own it.
besides that, ( a little constructive criticism), i think that you should focus less on rhyming and more on what you're trying to say, as the point can easily get lost in phonetic words.
'Hours pass like Minutes'
I've read that phrase before, therefor you do not own it.
besides that, ( a little constructive criticism), i think that you should focus less on rhyming and more on what you're trying to say, as the point can easily get lost in phonetic words.