for Flesh of the Dead
12/20/2007 c1 
3caz15thI love it! I really like the way you use the sort of formal, old style "O" before words like happy and joyful; it shows the religious undertone. The irony is wonderful, I really like the last sentence. The rhyme is excellant, not over done but just right. Great work :D
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