for Repetitions5/3/2008 c1 
18Saran D. Pity
Really, nice. The ending was abrupt, but that helped you get your point across (good writing technique)
18Saran D. PityReally, nice. The ending was abrupt, but that helped you get your point across (good writing technique)
12/19/2007 c1 sylvia's syndrome
I liked this. It’s an interesting and enjoyable social commentary. I liked the effect of the last two lines. Keep up the good work!
I liked this. It’s an interesting and enjoyable social commentary. I liked the effect of the last two lines. Keep up the good work!