for I Could Have Been Saved12/20/2007 c1 
174a silenced revolution
Excellent rhymes and rhythms. The choice of words is very effective at conveying the drama and tragedy of losing something that can't be regained. Very well done.
174a silenced revolutionExcellent rhymes and rhythms. The choice of words is very effective at conveying the drama and tragedy of losing something that can't be regained. Very well done.
12/20/2007 c1 11ending your life with one glar
i relat to this
my bf was an ass and this is how i felt 3 weeks agoe
good job keep righting
christina
aka bitch-that-will-eat-your-soul
look into my poetry and revew on wat u think
11ending your life with one glari relat to this
my bf was an ass and this is how i felt 3 weeks agoe
good job keep righting
christina
aka bitch-that-will-eat-your-soul
look into my poetry and revew on wat u think