for BUBBLES5/30/2011 c10 PineappleBoxers
Up to this point, I can say that this story has great ideas in it, but it's displayed in a slightly ungraceful way. I know this fic is just for shits and giggles,, but it could be so much better if you polished it a bit. Everythijg feels sort of rushed and choppy. Still going to read though since the characters are great. :D
Up to this point, I can say that this story has great ideas in it, but it's displayed in a slightly ungraceful way. I know this fic is just for shits and giggles,, but it could be so much better if you polished it a bit. Everythijg feels sort of rushed and choppy. Still going to read though since the characters are great. :D
5/29/2011 c6 PineappleBoxers
Bubblewrap is the best. It just so fuffilling when the little circular thing pops! Ahh, bliss.
Damn Dale is making progress so slowwww. Wise up, man!
Next chapter, WOO!
Bubblewrap is the best. It just so fuffilling when the little circular thing pops! Ahh, bliss.
Damn Dale is making progress so slowwww. Wise up, man!
Next chapter, WOO!
5/29/2011 c3 PineappleBoxers
I actually like Syl. I like him more than Dale anyway. Dale's a little too ditsy. I like how this story is going so far! Ohhh teenage angst.
I actually like Syl. I like him more than Dale anyway. Dale's a little too ditsy. I like how this story is going so far! Ohhh teenage angst.
5/29/2011 c2 PineappleBoxers
Silly Syl, dating the exact opposite of Dale. I find it absolutely adorable and disgusting. -excitedly goes to the next chapter-
Silly Syl, dating the exact opposite of Dale. I find it absolutely adorable and disgusting. -excitedly goes to the next chapter-
5/7/2011 c18 
3Channitut
How did you make the "TM" ? That's what I'm wondering about, not how you wrote this piece of awesomeness.
3ChannitutHow did you make the "TM" ? That's what I'm wondering about, not how you wrote this piece of awesomeness.
5/2/2011 c4 Channitut
You could so take over the world. 90% are losers, who doesn't know it. 10% are losers, who knows it. Go get 'em!
You could so take over the world. 90% are losers, who doesn't know it. 10% are losers, who knows it. Go get 'em!
5/2/2011 c3 Channitut
I like Dale, he rules. I tried playing Bubble Buster. It's kinda fun. Shame on you, you got me addícted. By the way I lost the game.
I like Dale, he rules. I tried playing Bubble Buster. It's kinda fun. Shame on you, you got me addícted. By the way I lost the game.
5/2/2011 c2 Channitut
This story seems nice. It looks quite good. I'm not sure, I understand, is Dale and Syl going to get together or what? I'll just have to read and find out.
This story seems nice. It looks quite good. I'm not sure, I understand, is Dale and Syl going to get together or what? I'll just have to read and find out.
3/17/2011 c20 00000000000000000000000000000
Just finished the whole story and LOVED IT! It was bubbletastic _ Gonna go check out your other stories
Just finished the whole story and LOVED IT! It was bubbletastic _ Gonna go check out your other stories
3/16/2011 c20 Wicked Neko
KYAA! I LOVE IT!
This is such a perfect ending! ♥
Thank you so much for writing such an awesome story.
You effin' own.
:D
KYAA! I LOVE IT!
This is such a perfect ending! ♥
Thank you so much for writing such an awesome story.
You effin' own.
:D
3/6/2011 c20 Sarah
Oh boy. I can't believe this story is actually OVER! I'm sad because there's no more Syl and Dale but happy because you updated and ARE ACTUALLY ALIVE. I'm gunna miss these boys, and I love how they still haven't really got their shit together haha.
Yeah and so... btw it would be really cool if you uh updated some other stuff... *cough* Winter Storms *cough*.
Not so subtle hint ;)
Oh boy. I can't believe this story is actually OVER! I'm sad because there's no more Syl and Dale but happy because you updated and ARE ACTUALLY ALIVE. I'm gunna miss these boys, and I love how they still haven't really got their shit together haha.
Yeah and so... btw it would be really cool if you uh updated some other stuff... *cough* Winter Storms *cough*.
Not so subtle hint ;)