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12/26/2007 c3 Cracked Butterfruit
Ah-ha. I'm liking Sabrina. Weird, I know, but I like her. (Or the lack of her, same thing)

And si-i-i-gh poor Syl. Dale and Syl are so cute together. I want. MORE. NOW. PLEASE. COOL. YAY!

Oh, their little...teacher pupil thing (snigger) I likey lots and lots of. Update soon! Loving you lots :DD
12/26/2007 c2 Cracked Butterfruit
Syl is sexy.

Syl is sexy

He talks sexy.

He is sexy.

He's also a bloody tool. As you have already said, but it has bigger impact when I repeat it too. :DD

I love him. Aloo-o-o-o-o-o-t.

I love this story. Aloo-o-o-o-o-o-t.
12/26/2007 c1 Cracked Butterfruit
BLOODY GENIUS! FREAKING...WOW WOW WOW WOW

BUBBLES! JAPANESE CARTOON PORN! GODDAMN, KINGDOM HEARTS?

(Jesus, I am a sucker for Kingdom Hearts. Anything with KH slash KH2 in it, and I'm like, please marry me now.)

You roll up everything that is worth living for into this...vortex of literary brilliance and post it for the whole world to read. Syl is sexy. There's no more to it. Sexy, sexy, sexy, sexy, thank you.
12/26/2007 c3 svvitch
Well, Syl is kind of annoying. But the little "dirty roleplay" scene... THAT was funny.
12/26/2007 c3 47Helizabeth
i like Syl. almost more than Dale. i feel sympathy for Syl. i kinda don't like Dale 'cause he's being really dumb and naive sometimes. good chappy! um, i don't think i'm even going to ask what Bubblebuster is. how long has Syl liked Dale? is Syl bi, or is dating Sabrina pure HELL? i would die if i had to date and empty-headead dumb-ass. tho i do like the guy in my spanish class who is failing, so i can sort of sympathized w/ Syl on that subject, but not really. good chappy!
12/26/2007 c3 unknown'writer'loved
Hahahaha

That made me laugh

Aw, Dale sounded so cute, with his hair tied up and everything!

Squee! Cuteness!
12/24/2007 c2 svvitch
I dunno, I kinda like Syl. He's an incredible IDIOT, but he's kinda funny. And he is a bit of a jerk, but in a way that makes him the type of person you wanna hit in the face! He also reminds me of this dude I really dislike, only even LESS sincere! I don't know why he's funny, he just kinda is...

Hm, anyway, I think that this is an interesting turn of events. As far as the POV shifts go, well... I don't know. Thus far, I don't really have an opinion on whose I like better...
12/24/2007 c2 Helizabeth
22. you used "fuck" or "fucking" 22 times. that was 5 more than the last person i counted. GOOD FOR YOU! if i knew you personally, you would probably be my best friend. good story!
12/24/2007 c1 Helizabeth
i liked it. and i thought i was the only one who cussed that much. no wait! there was one other story. my stories don't really cuss tho. back to yours! good! i like! FUCKIN LOVE SLASH!
12/24/2007 c2 unknown'writer'loved
SYL YOU SLUT!

There.

Even a bit of alliteration.
12/24/2007 c2 3Tobyk947
Syl is a tool. WHat that crap, going for a girl like that? He's on drugs. GIVE HUGS, NOT DRUGS, SYL! ::GLOMPS Freak-of-Spade:: LOVES YOU!
12/24/2007 c1 Tobyk947
Aw...I LOVE IT! ::GLOMP:: please write more! I updated Psychic academy...hehehheh.. it has some lemon...hahaha..MERRY CHRISTMAS! ::GLOMPS::
12/21/2007 c1 9Stooped
OH. My. God. I LOVE THIS! It's not a one shot, right? Kuz it totally is so good. I want more! PLEASE continue as quickly as possible!
12/21/2007 c1 svvitch
Make it long! So we can read morre? Please?

Adorable! Heheh...I cracked up at the "getting off" thing... And isn't it just hilarious how they got into such a fight over Syl popping a bubble...? I can picture them! Kawaii! :D
12/21/2007 c1 unknown'writer'loved
I love it.

OH MY GOD!

IT'S YOU AGAIN!

STOP WRITING GOOD STORIES FOR ME TO GET HOOKED ON!

My god.

:)
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