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9/5/2008 c1 fleur de l'est
"Damned by the demons of my heart but saved by the presence of the gospel."

I loved this. And I'm not 100% sure but perhaps the battle within oneself is what you mean by "a warrior"?

It's interesting, in a good way, how you made this between a poem and a story, like a mini-fantasy type thing, whilst not getting carried away by it.

Very nicely done indeed =)

~fleur
12/21/2007 c1 1The Raging Inferno
Bow down to the industry that generates warfare, glorifies mediocrity, and enslaves its followers.
12/21/2007 c1 612simpleplan13
I like the repetition of prestigious thats nice and the whole idea behind this poem is really original and great.. awesomejob

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