
9/5/2008 c1 fleur de l'est
"Damned by the demons of my heart but saved by the presence of the gospel."
I loved this. And I'm not 100% sure but perhaps the battle within oneself is what you mean by "a warrior"?
It's interesting, in a good way, how you made this between a poem and a story, like a mini-fantasy type thing, whilst not getting carried away by it.
Very nicely done indeed =)
~fleur
"Damned by the demons of my heart but saved by the presence of the gospel."
I loved this. And I'm not 100% sure but perhaps the battle within oneself is what you mean by "a warrior"?
It's interesting, in a good way, how you made this between a poem and a story, like a mini-fantasy type thing, whilst not getting carried away by it.
Very nicely done indeed =)
~fleur
12/21/2007 c1
1The Raging Inferno
Bow down to the industry that generates warfare, glorifies mediocrity, and enslaves its followers.

Bow down to the industry that generates warfare, glorifies mediocrity, and enslaves its followers.
12/21/2007 c1
612simpleplan13
I like the repetition of prestigious thats nice and the whole idea behind this poem is really original and great.. awesomejob

I like the repetition of prestigious thats nice and the whole idea behind this poem is really original and great.. awesomejob