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3/16/2008 c1 39Finwe
Yes, yes I've felt this. I like how little you used punctuation, because it left your poem with a sense of freedom, like floating on a breeze, which adds a bit to what you were saying, I think. It makes it that much more poignant that you are held back from attaining that oh-so-reachable goal. Keep it up!
1/8/2008 c1 20Grey of Solitude
Yeah, I can definitely relate.
1/5/2008 c1 3torn pieces
I can relate as well.

^_^
1/4/2008 c1 76Kaia Zeffirelli
I can most definitely relate. Very good- short, simple, and to the point, but you still do a great job expressing the tone and meaning! Love it.
12/22/2007 c1 81thursdays and rain
a nice quick read.. keep writing!

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