for Fully Alive3/25/2012 c1 cheesesticksforlife9911
Wow... so i dont even know why it triggered something, but i bawled my eyes out when i read this... it was really amazing. 3
Wow... so i dont even know why it triggered something, but i bawled my eyes out when i read this... it was really amazing. 3
1/18/2010 c1 
10Sabreal
I think a few tears slipped out =[
God, I'm a hormonal wreck these days :) Good story though. Kinda melancholy but I knew what I was letting myself in for, I guess...
10SabrealI think a few tears slipped out =[
God, I'm a hormonal wreck these days :) Good story though. Kinda melancholy but I knew what I was letting myself in for, I guess...
12/13/2008 c1 13blurrylights
That was so sad...I feel like crying. I loved how you never said the guys name though. But really...so sad. Amazing job. :)
13blurrylightsThat was so sad...I feel like crying. I loved how you never said the guys name though. But really...so sad. Amazing job. :)
7/19/2008 c1 1w.rite.reckless
Your story wasn't the most cheereiest, and I usually don't read tragedy, but I liked it. You did a sort of first/second-perspective, and it turned out good (not to mention original). Keep writing.
1w.rite.recklessYour story wasn't the most cheereiest, and I usually don't read tragedy, but I liked it. You did a sort of first/second-perspective, and it turned out good (not to mention original). Keep writing.
3/17/2008 c1 6synysterxdeviant
Oh my godsh I luffs it. Amazingly tragic...true love at its most tragic. amazing.
6synysterxdeviantOh my godsh I luffs it. Amazingly tragic...true love at its most tragic. amazing.
2/17/2008 c1 5broken-and-bruised
o my god that was amazing. you put so much feeling into and i almost cried at the almost end
5broken-and-bruisedo my god that was amazing. you put so much feeling into and i almost cried at the almost end
12/27/2007 c1 SummerBaby94
it's very very bittersweet, and actually kind of depressing... but it just works. i'm not sure how, but you made this work amazingly.
it's very very bittersweet, and actually kind of depressing... but it just works. i'm not sure how, but you made this work amazingly.
12/24/2007 c1 8heartfeltlove
Aw...
Why did he have to kill himself...
Is their a possibility of him magically coming back to life?
8heartfeltloveAw...
Why did he have to kill himself...
Is their a possibility of him magically coming back to life?
12/24/2007 c1 Alenor
it's not at all cheerful. why didn't he just move away or something? there's no need to kill himself.
it's not at all cheerful. why didn't he just move away or something? there's no need to kill himself.
12/23/2007 c1 cyanidecandy
this story is really sweet, great work.
loved it !
this story is really sweet, great work.
loved it !
12/22/2007 c1 12Lily's Sushi
hey. haha, i don't even know you.
i like it better than your other stories, because the others are really focused on dialogue, which isn't always that important. in this one, the narration is just better- talks about setting, real emotions, etc. it felt rushed; a lot happened. and you could edit it more, add more detail. but the girl is believeable- low self esteem and all. i can definitely relate to that. even though it's sort of cliche, i like it. i mean, what girl doesn't like a good romance story, right? and i like "i'm gonna be someone." i have to remind myself that pretty frequently. :)
12Lily's Sushihey. haha, i don't even know you.
i like it better than your other stories, because the others are really focused on dialogue, which isn't always that important. in this one, the narration is just better- talks about setting, real emotions, etc. it felt rushed; a lot happened. and you could edit it more, add more detail. but the girl is believeable- low self esteem and all. i can definitely relate to that. even though it's sort of cliche, i like it. i mean, what girl doesn't like a good romance story, right? and i like "i'm gonna be someone." i have to remind myself that pretty frequently. :)