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for Flute of the Traeumerin

1/27/2008 c5 CorruptGuardian
A very good beginning, in my opinion. Extremely intriging, full of promises of what's to come instead of info-dumps. The very model of an intro, I think. I can't really point out any outstanding flaws, as nothing really caught my eye as out-of-place, awkward or muddled.

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