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4/10/2008 c2 28woodstock1969
SPORK REFERENCE! You get major points for that. :-)

I just love your writing style. It's incredibly witty and sardonic in a way that fits the narrator's personality perfectly. The group of boys that Rachael hangs out with are also completely adorable/hilarious. I love them!

Update soon!
4/10/2008 c2 6Death Tastes Like Cherries
Which one's Max? WHICH ONE? WHY DON'T I KNOW? i'm a failure at life!
4/10/2008 c2 3Lady Wrye
Cute story! I would love to see where this goes... :)
3/23/2008 c1 1Rachael Rin
Rachael reminds me of me. And my name's Rachael too...weeiirdd.

Anywho, very cute. More more!
12/31/2007 c1 KATIE MATTHEWS

i can totally tell where you're inspiration for jim, sean and aaron came from.

Jim. i forgot at the moment. lol. but most likely He who must not be named.

sean. MIKE!

Aaron. ben elder.


its good!

i like it.

write more!
12/23/2007 c1 Thatgirl
I have to agree. You just kind of plunge into a normal everyday life for a girl who has a histarical humor. Keep writing!
12/23/2007 c1 6beccabrighteyes
Oh! Blind date with the ex could be fun. Can't wait to see what happens next.
12/23/2007 c1 6n. paige
this is cute... I hope you keep it up! I only noticed one thing... originally the guys name was justin... but I think somewhere along the line you changed it to jason... maybe I'm wrond though... not completely sure...
12/23/2007 c1 13SamanthaNicole
I absolutely loved this. I'm going to think of this story as a little Christmas gift to the people of FP, and for that, I thank you ;-)

But I digress.

This is so well-written and clever. Chick!lit is totally my guilty pleasure, and it isn't often you find one this good. I'll definitely be adding it to my favorites.

The characters are well thought out, and I love all of Rachel's witty remarks, as well as the things she's thinking. I've been on a first-person POV kick for a while now (both in writing and reading) for that exact reason - you really get to know a character by being inside their head.

And can I just say, for the record, Rachel is a fantastic character. Bravo.

Fairytale complex... love it!

I'll be eagerly awaiting your next update.


12/23/2007 c1 28woodstock1969
I love it so far! Your writing style is wonderful. The dialogue is snappy and entertaining, and the narration is hilariously descriptive. I like Rachael as well. She's a very realistic character: not completely oblivious, not waiting for Prince Charming, not a stereotypical high school character (jock, nerd, slut, etc.), but just right; a normal person. I can't wait to read more!

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