for The Story Contest7/3/2010 c1 
18Open your eyes Chopstick
Yeah...I feel bad for tony. Or maybe I shouldn't? He gets to go to a free writing class. LOL. The story was nice, simple, and sweet. I didn't really see much, but you forgot to cap Tony's name here: "She had hoped tony would have gotten the prize." That's all i really saw. Good job.
18Open your eyes ChopstickYeah...I feel bad for tony. Or maybe I shouldn't? He gets to go to a free writing class. LOL. The story was nice, simple, and sweet. I didn't really see much, but you forgot to cap Tony's name here: "She had hoped tony would have gotten the prize." That's all i really saw. Good job.