
1/30/2008 c2
14Three Score and Ten
Oh gods...I'm dying of laughter over here. Dying. This story, short as it is, is *wonderful*. You took a concept that's been played with half-heartedly before and made it real and feasible and hilarious into the bargain. Frederic is a very believeable character and is actually reacting the way a real person would to his...unusual circumstances. As long as you keep avoiding the cliches, I cannot wait to see more of this story!

Oh gods...I'm dying of laughter over here. Dying. This story, short as it is, is *wonderful*. You took a concept that's been played with half-heartedly before and made it real and feasible and hilarious into the bargain. Frederic is a very believeable character and is actually reacting the way a real person would to his...unusual circumstances. As long as you keep avoiding the cliches, I cannot wait to see more of this story!
1/20/2008 c2
4Mechanical Dolls
LOL! Omg! This is my favorite so far. I love it! Update soon or I will stalk you forever. :D
-MD

LOL! Omg! This is my favorite so far. I love it! Update soon or I will stalk you forever. :D
-MD
1/18/2008 c2
1samalane
Wonderful, and completely random (that is the word of the day, apparently.) Anyways, I definitely like where this is going so far. It's cute, and I can't wait to read more!

Wonderful, and completely random (that is the word of the day, apparently.) Anyways, I definitely like where this is going so far. It's cute, and I can't wait to read more!
1/16/2008 c2
5Mister Cat
It certainly is refreshing to have a new kind of fiction type... well... I adore Freddie's attitude and Ulrich's uh... manner toward the word damsel let's say...
anyway please update

It certainly is refreshing to have a new kind of fiction type... well... I adore Freddie's attitude and Ulrich's uh... manner toward the word damsel let's say...
anyway please update
1/13/2008 c2 firedraygon97
Hahahaha, oh wow, so great. Of COURSE it's a curse. Ulrich is brilliant. *rolls eyes* I'm just waiting for when he figures it out. This is such a fun story. Evelyn is so delightfully evil. Please do write more soon!
~firedraygon97
Hahahaha, oh wow, so great. Of COURSE it's a curse. Ulrich is brilliant. *rolls eyes* I'm just waiting for when he figures it out. This is such a fun story. Evelyn is so delightfully evil. Please do write more soon!
~firedraygon97
1/13/2008 c2
17I'll Be Your Fairytale
I love the chapter just as much as the last. It's both funny and well written. This new prince is such an idiot, but I'm going to hope he's fallen for Frederic anyway by the time he works out that there's no curse. Anyway, Frederic is every so sweet too, makes me smile. So, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, so update soon please hun!
Luv, I-B-Y-F, x

I love the chapter just as much as the last. It's both funny and well written. This new prince is such an idiot, but I'm going to hope he's fallen for Frederic anyway by the time he works out that there's no curse. Anyway, Frederic is every so sweet too, makes me smile. So, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, so update soon please hun!
Luv, I-B-Y-F, x
1/13/2008 c2
1Emeline67
Great stuff! (although, i think the bit where Freddy goes "Evelyn, you bitch!" is a bit too much...cos well, it doesnt really seem to continue the fairytale theme, but thats just my op...:P)
Keep it comming! I think this might b one of the most popular stories on the sight by the time ur done.

Great stuff! (although, i think the bit where Freddy goes "Evelyn, you bitch!" is a bit too much...cos well, it doesnt really seem to continue the fairytale theme, but thats just my op...:P)
Keep it comming! I think this might b one of the most popular stories on the sight by the time ur done.
1/12/2008 c2 scentedkisses
hahaha i laughed so hard :D:D lol cursed damsel
thanks so much for the chappie! im lovin this story so keep up the great work!
luv gem xx
hahaha i laughed so hard :D:D lol cursed damsel
thanks so much for the chappie! im lovin this story so keep up the great work!
luv gem xx
1/12/2008 c2 Pivoine
dear andy, that was a lovely chapter! At first I was afraid that your second chapter will be less interesting thant the first one (I've often been disappointed by stories which at first seemed great, but later turned out to be really boring).
I'm glad I was wrong.
This chapter is great too.
and I'm going to repeat myself : FUNNY!
and you know, I was thinking "well a kiss will break the curse!"
I wonder if evelyn's kiss isn't preferable? prince ulrich seems unstable...he has a damsel fixation...
dear andy, that was a lovely chapter! At first I was afraid that your second chapter will be less interesting thant the first one (I've often been disappointed by stories which at first seemed great, but later turned out to be really boring).
I'm glad I was wrong.
This chapter is great too.
and I'm going to repeat myself : FUNNY!
and you know, I was thinking "well a kiss will break the curse!"
I wonder if evelyn's kiss isn't preferable? prince ulrich seems unstable...he has a damsel fixation...
1/4/2008 c1
17I'll Be Your Fairytale
I do have to say that this is quite fantastic! I love the way it starts and the playing around with fairytale stuff and everyday concepts made me smile, I like the ads for the damsels in distress in the newspaper too; priceless. Anyways, what more can I say? Well...I love the characters, the general idea and I'm looking forward to the next chapter, so pretty please update soon hun!
Luv, I-B-Y-F, x

I do have to say that this is quite fantastic! I love the way it starts and the playing around with fairytale stuff and everyday concepts made me smile, I like the ads for the damsels in distress in the newspaper too; priceless. Anyways, what more can I say? Well...I love the characters, the general idea and I'm looking forward to the next chapter, so pretty please update soon hun!
Luv, I-B-Y-F, x
1/2/2008 c1 Cracked Butterfruit
Holy gods! You ARE going to update this sometime right? Right? RIGHT? You'd damn bloody better.
Because HOLY SHIT THIS IS GODDAMN INCREDIBLE ALREADY! Several times I was grinning stupidly to myself. Seriously, reading your Chapter 1 made me feel wonderfully expectant and giddy. The writing just flows and pauses so well and LE SPARKLENESSE PRINCE ULRICH is shit cute.
So-o-o-o update soon loverly :DD
Holy gods! You ARE going to update this sometime right? Right? RIGHT? You'd damn bloody better.
Because HOLY SHIT THIS IS GODDAMN INCREDIBLE ALREADY! Several times I was grinning stupidly to myself. Seriously, reading your Chapter 1 made me feel wonderfully expectant and giddy. The writing just flows and pauses so well and LE SPARKLENESSE PRINCE ULRICH is shit cute.
So-o-o-o update soon loverly :DD
12/29/2007 c1
15Switch
There's more to this, right? Please please please? Oh, I know this is going to be good. :) Can't wait to read more. Please update son!

There's more to this, right? Please please please? Oh, I know this is going to be good. :) Can't wait to read more. Please update son!
12/28/2007 c1
3nonaccount
Very cute beginning. How did Frederic get "distressed" in the castle in the first place?

Very cute beginning. How did Frederic get "distressed" in the castle in the first place?