
12/26/2007 c1 sylvia's syndrome
I liked the way you formatting this piece; I think the format lent itself to the meaning, enhancing the poem as a whole. I liked the phrase “my finite mind.” Keep up the good work!
I liked the way you formatting this piece; I think the format lent itself to the meaning, enhancing the poem as a whole. I liked the phrase “my finite mind.” Keep up the good work!