for The Pregnant Life of Norah Jade2/11/2008 c16 
15collypollyy
yay! u updated! i was getting worried that you wouldnt update! anyway wonderful update!
nice job!
update soon
15collypollyyyay! u updated! i was getting worried that you wouldnt update! anyway wonderful update!
nice job!
update soon
2/10/2008 c16 Writing Utensil
Ep. Wow. I like the story and haven't had a chance to review but am taking my opportunity now. ^^ I notice quite a few spelling mistakes, but the only reason I'm saying anything about that is because my best friend has turned me into a grammar freak, go figure. The story is another one of those stories that gets me hooked and keeps me there until the story is done. Well written, but for some reason I crave more, even though I don't know what that more is. Oh well, I must say it, write onward.
Ep. Wow. I like the story and haven't had a chance to review but am taking my opportunity now. ^^ I notice quite a few spelling mistakes, but the only reason I'm saying anything about that is because my best friend has turned me into a grammar freak, go figure. The story is another one of those stories that gets me hooked and keeps me there until the story is done. Well written, but for some reason I crave more, even though I don't know what that more is. Oh well, I must say it, write onward.
2/9/2008 c15 2Goldenstars
l think this is my fav. chapter. i think it is cuz Norah isn't been realy slack and not cleaning, and her family isn't tellin her to stop. In other words l like it because its not a cliche.
Also the nick names tangerine and apple are realy cute. great work. :) keep writing :)
2Goldenstarsl think this is my fav. chapter. i think it is cuz Norah isn't been realy slack and not cleaning, and her family isn't tellin her to stop. In other words l like it because its not a cliche.
Also the nick names tangerine and apple are realy cute. great work. :) keep writing :)
1/28/2008 c14 15collypollyy
Nice update!
THis is my favorite song out of the whole story! I love Paramore!
My favorite character is Norah cuz shes not afarid to be herself
love this chapter like i love this story
Update SOON!
15collypollyyNice update!
THis is my favorite song out of the whole story! I love Paramore!
My favorite character is Norah cuz shes not afarid to be herself
love this chapter like i love this story
Update SOON!
1/23/2008 c13 15collypollyy
Wow... i just found this story today... it is very well written! i love this story
i love how devon doesnt care that norah is pregant and he still loves her for her
Well... anyway... good job!
Update SOON! :)
15collypollyyWow... i just found this story today... it is very well written! i love this story
i love how devon doesnt care that norah is pregant and he still loves her for her
Well... anyway... good job!
Update SOON! :)
1/13/2008 c12 1Smidojuice
1.) Dev. Cause hes hott. Even though I think he's cheating on her.
2.) Brat Pack. I've always loved that song.
3.) “Oh shut up. I just came over here to…”...“…take my apple sauce. I understand.”
4.) Dev... Like Devin from Much Music. But buffer. Look him up.
Norah... Pretty asian girl with long hair.
Stella... That girl from the movie Read it and Weep. Look her up too. Nikki, pretty, tall, long straight blonde hair.
this story = (L)
1Smidojuice1.) Dev. Cause hes hott. Even though I think he's cheating on her.
2.) Brat Pack. I've always loved that song.
3.) “Oh shut up. I just came over here to…”...“…take my apple sauce. I understand.”
4.) Dev... Like Devin from Much Music. But buffer. Look him up.
Norah... Pretty asian girl with long hair.
Stella... That girl from the movie Read it and Weep. Look her up too. Nikki, pretty, tall, long straight blonde hair.
this story = (L)
1/13/2008 c12 2Goldenstars
omg l so didnt expect her to black out
i was a good change from the evrythings gud part u were currently at.
&& l glad that her n nikki r finally friends
plz update soon! lm addicted 2 this story!
2Goldenstarsomg l so didnt expect her to black out
i was a good change from the evrythings gud part u were currently at.
&& l glad that her n nikki r finally friends
plz update soon! lm addicted 2 this story!
1/11/2008 c4 3spillover
Chapter 4- Her PARENTS are pregnant too! Oh, my gosh. How unexpected. They took it very well. :)
3spilloverChapter 4- Her PARENTS are pregnant too! Oh, my gosh. How unexpected. They took it very well. :)
1/10/2008 c10 3Serendipity Haze
Awwh the baby is on it's way!
How exciting!
Update as soon as you can please!
3Serendipity HazeAwwh the baby is on it's way!
How exciting!
Update as soon as you can please!
1/8/2008 c4 29lupine-eyes
Its really nice that her parents are so supportive. The cliche would have been to have her parents blow up, but eventually accept it. ^_^
Anyway, great job.
29lupine-eyesIts really nice that her parents are so supportive. The cliche would have been to have her parents blow up, but eventually accept it. ^_^
Anyway, great job.