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for Only A Red Pump oneshot

1/14/2011 c1 sara
lulz i love the censor thing you had at the beginning
6/26/2010 c1 3septasonicxx
This was so cute! XD
2/23/2008 c1 1Jevanminx
Hehehehe that was cute.

1/1/2008 c1 4GrannyP
Cute. That was funny at the beginning when she just started hitting him because he complimented her.

Something you might watch out for is putting punctuation at the end of each paragraph, including at the end of quotes.
12/30/2007 c1 7Riley Hunter
Intersting one shot! It's good.
12/29/2007 c1 3EverythingWeHad

I wanna know how they found each other's names. =]

Great oneshot. I loved it! ^^
12/28/2007 c1 3TiReD oF tHiS bOrInG tOwN
i like it. i liked it the first tie also. i hope that you keep it updated. if you need any help editing tell me
12/27/2007 c1 SummerBaby94
hahaha. that was adorable! there were a lot of mistakes though.
12/27/2007 c1 xxily4everxx
lol its a nice story ^^

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