for The Lines in Between6/12/2011 c1 
16non.graceful
It was sweet.
You caught the Scene perfectly and showed the different emotions through your words.
It wasn't one of those sickly sweet best friend love stories and for that I'm grateful.
You have some potential :)
16non.gracefulIt was sweet.
You caught the Scene perfectly and showed the different emotions through your words.
It wasn't one of those sickly sweet best friend love stories and for that I'm grateful.
You have some potential :)
3/29/2011 c1 TeddyBearHugs
I love this story! It made my insides feel all warm and fuzzy. XD It definately put a smile on my face. You're a great author. ^^
I love this story! It made my insides feel all warm and fuzzy. XD It definately put a smile on my face. You're a great author. ^^
12/8/2008 c1 13blurrylights
Ohh...I absolutely loved this. It was really sweet, and all those feelings, that discomfort and insecurity, the shyness, and then the love came through really well. Amazing.:)
13blurrylightsOhh...I absolutely loved this. It was really sweet, and all those feelings, that discomfort and insecurity, the shyness, and then the love came through really well. Amazing.:)
8/15/2008 c1 1DirtyLiar
What sane girl wouldn't do anything to have this?
/A hug that says he understands. A hug that says he’s read the lines in between.
And he loves her too./
This is so cute.
I want to read more of your stuff, girl your making me hungry for your writing.
I really liked the story. Your amazing =).
1DirtyLiarWhat sane girl wouldn't do anything to have this?
/A hug that says he understands. A hug that says he’s read the lines in between.
And he loves her too./
This is so cute.
I want to read more of your stuff, girl your making me hungry for your writing.
I really liked the story. Your amazing =).
7/21/2008 c1 13stunninglyaverage
That was really good. I liked how everyone else just spent money on gifts, but you find that the best gifts are ones that don't cost a thing.
13stunninglyaverageThat was really good. I liked how everyone else just spent money on gifts, but you find that the best gifts are ones that don't cost a thing.
5/29/2008 c1 7silvertealeaves
I love how your summary almost gives away the ending, but only contributes to building up the anticipation. I like your one-shot stories.
7silvertealeavesI love how your summary almost gives away the ending, but only contributes to building up the anticipation. I like your one-shot stories.
3/5/2008 c1 12harrison-girl
Very nicely done. I like how it flows, and the minimal dialogue makes it very easy to understand.
12harrison-girlVery nicely done. I like how it flows, and the minimal dialogue makes it very easy to understand.