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1/28/2012 c1 1NeonTime
This is utterly lovely.
1/3/2012 c1 46SwimmingThroughExistance
thats beautiful!aww:3
6/12/2011 c1 16non.graceful
It was sweet.

You caught the Scene perfectly and showed the different emotions through your words.

It wasn't one of those sickly sweet best friend love stories and for that I'm grateful.

You have some potential :)
3/29/2011 c1 TeddyBearHugs
I love this story! It made my insides feel all warm and fuzzy. XD It definately put a smile on my face. You're a great author. ^^
10/8/2010 c1 ghurl00
I love how subtle the confession of the girl is. It's heartfelt.:)
12/8/2008 c1 13blurrylights
Ohh...I absolutely loved this. It was really sweet, and all those feelings, that discomfort and insecurity, the shyness, and then the love came through really well. Amazing.:)
8/15/2008 c1 1DirtyLiar
What sane girl wouldn't do anything to have this?

/A hug that says he understands. A hug that says he’s read the lines in between.

And he loves her too./

This is so cute.

I want to read more of your stuff, girl your making me hungry for your writing.

I really liked the story. Your amazing =).
7/21/2008 c1 13stunninglyaverage
That was really good. I liked how everyone else just spent money on gifts, but you find that the best gifts are ones that don't cost a thing.
5/29/2008 c1 7silvertealeaves
I love how your summary almost gives away the ending, but only contributes to building up the anticipation. I like your one-shot stories.
4/25/2008 c1 Needa S
Very sweet story. Beautifully done. Write on and God Bless.
4/1/2008 c1 4PennyLaneismysong
Im so sad now! But it was a GREAT story!
3/30/2008 c1 9SavannahX
Aw, that was cute! And it was such a creative gift.
3/5/2008 c1 12harrison-girl
Very nicely done. I like how it flows, and the minimal dialogue makes it very easy to understand.
3/2/2008 c1 2Mon Esperance
That was beautiful! I love it, it's so sweet. Keep it up :)~
2/11/2008 c1 2mia5081
That was incredibly sweet, and definitely well written...I love how he didn't turn her away-even though I wouldn't exactly expect that from a best friend :D

Good job!

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