for Restricted Desire1/9/2008 c1 
26killer syntax
I'll be honest in saying I wasn't into this piece as much as your other works, but I was nonetheless enthralled by the imperative nature of the short, rhyming lines.
26killer syntaxI'll be honest in saying I wasn't into this piece as much as your other works, but I was nonetheless enthralled by the imperative nature of the short, rhyming lines.
1/8/2008 c1 20Grey of Solitude
Cool. I love the words you use. I also like the title. In a weird way, it reminds me of red. LOL Keep writing.
20Grey of SolitudeCool. I love the words you use. I also like the title. In a weird way, it reminds me of red. LOL Keep writing.
1/4/2008 c1 76Kaia Zeffirelli
I would give you constructive criticism, but I can't think of any! The flow of this is great- love this one, too!
76Kaia ZeffirelliI would give you constructive criticism, but I can't think of any! The flow of this is great- love this one, too!