for Light and Dark9/21/2008 c5 chocolaterain
I absolutely loved this story. I wish there was some kind of sequel or something. But it's perfect the way it is. Thank you so much for writing this story. For some reason I was feeling kinda down today and I needed some fluffle help and your story was just the thing. Thank you so much and keep on writing. You're writing style is good and you don't make grammar mistakes. Just be sure to check the punctuation that's about all that's wrong. Thank you again and I can't wait to read the rest of your stories!
I absolutely loved this story. I wish there was some kind of sequel or something. But it's perfect the way it is. Thank you so much for writing this story. For some reason I was feeling kinda down today and I needed some fluffle help and your story was just the thing. Thank you so much and keep on writing. You're writing style is good and you don't make grammar mistakes. Just be sure to check the punctuation that's about all that's wrong. Thank you again and I can't wait to read the rest of your stories!
3/25/2008 c5 
4Signs
Really cute. I love the story but to think that it is only 5 chapters? It makes me sad.. You should have put a little more romance on it. Hehehe **what a perverted me** ^_^ Keep it up!
4SignsReally cute. I love the story but to think that it is only 5 chapters? It makes me sad.. You should have put a little more romance on it. Hehehe **what a perverted me** ^_^ Keep it up!
3/14/2008 c5 2Adis Crow
CoCo, you made me cry~ ^^
Agh, they're so damn cute! I love the "blushing seventeen shades of red" line, and the scene with the apple seller (I felt like yelling SNAP! as loud as I could)
8D I'm off to read Paradise!
2Adis CrowCoCo, you made me cry~ ^^
Agh, they're so damn cute! I love the "blushing seventeen shades of red" line, and the scene with the apple seller (I felt like yelling SNAP! as loud as I could)
8D I'm off to read Paradise!
3/12/2008 c5 7Silencia
(sobs) so beautiful! I hope they'll live happily ever after! (yeah, I have a huge imagination!)
7Silencia(sobs) so beautiful! I hope they'll live happily ever after! (yeah, I have a huge imagination!)
3/11/2008 c5 cyanidecandy
the idea was really good and cute :)
but towards the end , it got a little disappointing cuz the story just suddenly progressed at an amazing rate. one minute they're trying to conquer their fears, and the next they love each other ?
just thought it was a big jump.
but it was a cute story !
good work though !
the idea was really good and cute :)
but towards the end , it got a little disappointing cuz the story just suddenly progressed at an amazing rate. one minute they're trying to conquer their fears, and the next they love each other ?
just thought it was a big jump.
but it was a cute story !
good work though !
3/11/2008 c5 54big.break.and.laryngitis
oh, i love this! i am so sad to see it end, but, at the same time, i love the ending! it was way fabulous, so keep up the good work!
54big.break.and.laryngitisoh, i love this! i am so sad to see it end, but, at the same time, i love the ending! it was way fabulous, so keep up the good work!
3/11/2008 c4 7Silencia
YAY! THEY KISSED!
I still have so much questions! How did he get used to light so quickly? Why did he take the candle stumps? I hope the new chapter will come soon!
7SilenciaYAY! THEY KISSED!
I still have so much questions! How did he get used to light so quickly? Why did he take the candle stumps? I hope the new chapter will come soon!
3/10/2008 c4 54big.break.and.laryngitis
aw! they're so cute, danget! i love it, love it, love it!
it moved a little fast, but other than that it was brilliant. i'm sad to see it end so quickly, but on the other hand, it'll be a nice ending. so that's good.
post the epilogue soon!
54big.break.and.laryngitisaw! they're so cute, danget! i love it, love it, love it!
it moved a little fast, but other than that it was brilliant. i'm sad to see it end so quickly, but on the other hand, it'll be a nice ending. so that's good.
post the epilogue soon!
3/10/2008 c3 big.break.and.laryngitis
aw.
i love spontaneous hugs, yeah.
donovan's so cute! i dunno why, but he just IS! i like the hug sequence, with the detail and all. it was sweet.
they're so adorable.
aw.
i love spontaneous hugs, yeah.
donovan's so cute! i dunno why, but he just IS! i like the hug sequence, with the detail and all. it was sweet.
they're so adorable.
2/24/2008 c2 cyanidecandy
odd way of bringing them together. but still cute :)
a little more detail would be good !
keep updating :D
odd way of bringing them together. but still cute :)
a little more detail would be good !
keep updating :D
2/24/2008 c2 big.break.and.laryngitis
this was good. i want to see what beatrix thinks of donovan. he's cool, but i dunno if beatrix will see that. she seems alright enough, though, so i bet she's okay with him. maybe a bit suspicious, but, y'know, who wouldn't be?
this was really good! post more soon!
this was good. i want to see what beatrix thinks of donovan. he's cool, but i dunno if beatrix will see that. she seems alright enough, though, so i bet she's okay with him. maybe a bit suspicious, but, y'know, who wouldn't be?
this was really good! post more soon!
2/24/2008 c2 7Silencia
LOves the chapter! They are really getting along! Cant wait for maore! Lovs Silencia!
7SilenciaLOves the chapter! They are really getting along! Cant wait for maore! Lovs Silencia!
2/24/2008 c2 2Adis Crow
lol, I love how Donovan and Kalea keep cutting off their thoughts with "gah!" or "ack!" It's so kyoot~
2Adis Crowlol, I love how Donovan and Kalea keep cutting off their thoughts with "gah!" or "ack!" It's so kyoot~
2/23/2008 c1 54big.break.and.laryngitis
i like this very much
update as soon as you can, please, i'd like to read more.
54big.break.and.laryngitisi like this very much
update as soon as you can, please, i'd like to read more.