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7/21/2009 c1 HitomiJunichi
Wow, this is great!
3/31/2009 c1 anaa-pixie
aw so sweet!
5/11/2008 c1 1Frail.Wings.Of.Vanity
aw!

this is so kawaii and pretty!

well done.
3/22/2008 c1 Ratava100d
Thats such a cute story.
2/19/2008 c1 2Adis Crow
aaw, this is so kawaii! I think I got it when God said, “I’ve send an angel to be your guardian to take care of you, don’t worry, she’ll learn you walk and with her help you’ll grow into a big and mature human being.”

e, it's so kyoot!

(apologies for the spelling (or lack thereof))
2/16/2008 c1 1zela3
Aw...this was so cute! I loved this story, you're a good writer! The only constructive critisism is that it's kinda hard to read when its in one long paragraph, so maybe you could indent after each person speaks (just a suggestion...in fact I don't really recall if I did that even...)anyways, I thought this was a superb story and I loved your idea!

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