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3/31/2008 c1 21Faith Adeline
great piece. I believe the first sentence and last stanza are the most powerful in this poem, but the rest is still good. Wonderful job.

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1/6/2008 c1 she smolders
Somehow the rhyme of this makes it more heartfelt and honest. Take care.
12/30/2007 c1 hey maria
The opening line is one of my all-time favorites. And that is really saying something. So good job. :)
12/30/2007 c1 iamxnobody
Aw that was so sweet and sad and whatnot. i loved it

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