
3/31/2008 c1
21Faith Adeline
great piece. I believe the first sentence and last stanza are the most powerful in this poem, but the rest is still good. Wonderful job.
Faith

great piece. I believe the first sentence and last stanza are the most powerful in this poem, but the rest is still good. Wonderful job.
Faith
12/30/2007 c1 hey maria
The opening line is one of my all-time favorites. And that is really saying something. So good job. :)
The opening line is one of my all-time favorites. And that is really saying something. So good job. :)