for Noticed1/30/2009 c2 tushara
what a great story. i really like it. i wish the epilogue was longer.
what a great story. i really like it. i wish the epilogue was longer.
10/26/2008 c2 
2Desy.Rae
Okay, that was just plain cruel. You have to write someting of a sequal to this!
2Desy.RaeOkay, that was just plain cruel. You have to write someting of a sequal to this!
5/10/2008 c1 20forever-blues
I love how you keep on mentioning that she finds endless excuses to cover the things she does for him.
The story moved my feelings, and drawn out the memories that I thought I forgot.
20forever-bluesI love how you keep on mentioning that she finds endless excuses to cover the things she does for him.
The story moved my feelings, and drawn out the memories that I thought I forgot.
1/15/2008 c1 8somuchformyhappyending
I'm sorry that this guy seems to be such an ass. PLEASE knock some sense into him for me...please...
bec
p.s. that was amazing. really heart-felt.
8somuchformyhappyendingI'm sorry that this guy seems to be such an ass. PLEASE knock some sense into him for me...please...
bec
p.s. that was amazing. really heart-felt.
1/10/2008 c1 2Saphimire Karishnikova
Oh my. That was a wonderful piece. My eyes are still blurry from reading so fast and my brain still has to recover from the overwhelmingly good prose. Beautiful.
2Saphimire KarishnikovaOh my. That was a wonderful piece. My eyes are still blurry from reading so fast and my brain still has to recover from the overwhelmingly good prose. Beautiful.
1/4/2008 c1 SMALLwhitelies
nice... you know there are moments when you shock me because sometimes you write differently than i remembered, and i have to go see the author's name just to remind me. in a way it's sad, because i shouldn't forget. in a way it's good, because you can shock even those who thought they knew you best.
i liked it though. the sex scene was a bit "eh" because i know it's you writing, but i liked it. it wasn't overly graphic, making it perverse. for a sex scene it was done tastefully. (this is part of the reason i'm hesitant to write a full blown sex scene.) this whole thing is well written though.
i think that there is something that needs to be said about the anonymous-ness of the web.
nice... you know there are moments when you shock me because sometimes you write differently than i remembered, and i have to go see the author's name just to remind me. in a way it's sad, because i shouldn't forget. in a way it's good, because you can shock even those who thought they knew you best.
i liked it though. the sex scene was a bit "eh" because i know it's you writing, but i liked it. it wasn't overly graphic, making it perverse. for a sex scene it was done tastefully. (this is part of the reason i'm hesitant to write a full blown sex scene.) this whole thing is well written though.
i think that there is something that needs to be said about the anonymous-ness of the web.
12/31/2007 c1 2Kali Shaelyn
That was really good. A simple story but it carries a lot of emotion. Nicely done!
2Kali ShaelynThat was really good. A simple story but it carries a lot of emotion. Nicely done!