for The Coming of Love1/8/2008 c1 
20Twilight Starr
Good beginning. Nice title. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrGood beginning. Nice title. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~
12/31/2007 c1 4Purity of Light
Oh please don't go choosing 14 year olds as your main characters. Trust me, that never goes well, as the characters end up becoming unrealistic everytime. You're better off going with an age around 16 or 17.
4Purity of LightOh please don't go choosing 14 year olds as your main characters. Trust me, that never goes well, as the characters end up becoming unrealistic everytime. You're better off going with an age around 16 or 17.
12/31/2007 c1 3Dark Luver Of Blood and Misery
I liked it! I remember when I was in that grade. Well, I hope for more of the story soon. I will add it to my alert. Good luck!
-Dark Luver
3Dark Luver Of Blood and MiseryI liked it! I remember when I was in that grade. Well, I hope for more of the story soon. I will add it to my alert. Good luck!
-Dark Luver