3/26/2009 c13 Alexandra
Aww that was cute! Too bad it wasn't longer, but that's ok :) Off to read another of your stories!
-A (too lazy to sign in)
Aww that was cute! Too bad it wasn't longer, but that's ok :) Off to read another of your stories!
-A (too lazy to sign in)
1/10/2009 c12 2ijelly
This story is written really well but I wish it could be a bit longer. I would like to read what would happen after the cotillion.
This story is written really well but I wish it could be a bit longer. I would like to read what would happen after the cotillion.
1/6/2009 c1 The Tragedian
I would like to see something longer. I like it, but I would you to be more considerate towards length.
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I would like to see something longer. I like it, but I would you to be more considerate towards length.
PAY IT FORWARD
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6/11/2008 c12 dOrKy-GuRl03
i have to admit..that story was good..too bad that its already finished..man its short..but o well..nice job on the story...looking forward more of your stories...bye..bye...
i have to admit..that story was good..too bad that its already finished..man its short..but o well..nice job on the story...looking forward more of your stories...bye..bye...
3/10/2008 c13 7Riley Hunter
thank YOU for writing this vondeful story! *tear* it's done. but that's sokay.
thank YOU for writing this vondeful story! *tear* it's done. but that's sokay.
3/10/2008 c12 Riley Hunter
aw. she's a little strange at how she doesn't believe him. But, that's Murphy!
aw. she's a little strange at how she doesn't believe him. But, that's Murphy!
3/10/2008 c13 23Hypa To Hell And Back
aww its so sweet...im review the last two chapter...i love it
im upset that its finished can you think off doing an epilogue or some thing:)?
aww its so sweet...im review the last two chapter...i love it
im upset that its finished can you think off doing an epilogue or some thing:)?
3/9/2008 c13 10CassandraStacy
The ending was very abrupt . . . although it did refer to the comment that was made in the beginning. However, I probably wouldn't have realized the story was over, if you didn't add this note. Nevertheless, it was still very cute.
Cassandra
The ending was very abrupt . . . although it did refer to the comment that was made in the beginning. However, I probably wouldn't have realized the story was over, if you didn't add this note. Nevertheless, it was still very cute.
Cassandra