for To Cliché or Not To Cliché3/9/2008 c10 CassandraStacy
short chapter. Way to raise reader's hopes only to go about crashing them to the ground.
short chapter. Way to raise reader's hopes only to go about crashing them to the ground.
3/9/2008 c10 
1JadeGoddess
and the complications begin...this was a short chapter...hope the next one was longer...
1JadeGoddessand the complications begin...this was a short chapter...hope the next one was longer...
3/5/2008 c8 Corrupted Lungs
OMG no! What does this mean for Murphy and Jared? Even though I know they don't really like each other, there's DEFINITELY something there, even now.
OMG no! What does this mean for Murphy and Jared? Even though I know they don't really like each other, there's DEFINITELY something there, even now.
3/5/2008 c8 10CassandraStacy
A moment of silence for Heath . . .
Good chapter. I can't wait for an update. Why is it that Jared and Murphy don't sit together?
Cassandra
10CassandraStacyA moment of silence for Heath . . .
Good chapter. I can't wait for an update. Why is it that Jared and Murphy don't sit together?
Cassandra
3/5/2008 c7 CassandraStacy
I love how she introduces herself to Ryan. It's very straightforward. By the way, why did she agree to do this bet anyway? I don't think that was really explained.
I love how she introduces herself to Ryan. It's very straightforward. By the way, why did she agree to do this bet anyway? I don't think that was really explained.
3/5/2008 c6 CassandraStacy
Random but funny first kiss. I love how she enjoys the kiss . . . realizes she's enjoying the kiss . . . and THEN breaks off because she's enjoying the kiss.
Cassandra
Random but funny first kiss. I love how she enjoys the kiss . . . realizes she's enjoying the kiss . . . and THEN breaks off because she's enjoying the kiss.
Cassandra
3/5/2008 c5 CassandraStacy
Aww . . . the wonders of TI. Who needs a cell phone when you've got calculators?
Cassandra
Aww . . . the wonders of TI. Who needs a cell phone when you've got calculators?
Cassandra
3/5/2008 c4 CassandraStacy
I have an older cousin who is like a sister/best friend. Except she's married and although she wouldn't care if I did drink, she probably would provide the alchohol.
Drunken puppy . . . what, exactly, does that pertain?
Cassandra
I have an older cousin who is like a sister/best friend. Except she's married and although she wouldn't care if I did drink, she probably would provide the alchohol.
Drunken puppy . . . what, exactly, does that pertain?
Cassandra
3/5/2008 c3 CassandraStacy
Okay, so this is really cute so far. It is also very well-written, as far as grammar goes, which is rare on this site. I liked the reaction of her friends when Jared talked to them in the previous chapter, and it was funny in this chapter when Murphy was like: 'Did I just smell him?'
Very entertaing!
Cassandra
P.S. I too, love Adam Brody as Seth Cohen. I have the first season on DVD, but I didn't like the third season all that much and wasn't able to watch the forth season . . . although I heard it got slightly better.
Okay, so this is really cute so far. It is also very well-written, as far as grammar goes, which is rare on this site. I liked the reaction of her friends when Jared talked to them in the previous chapter, and it was funny in this chapter when Murphy was like: 'Did I just smell him?'
Very entertaing!
Cassandra
P.S. I too, love Adam Brody as Seth Cohen. I have the first season on DVD, but I didn't like the third season all that much and wasn't able to watch the forth season . . . although I heard it got slightly better.