for Reveillon2/16/2010 c1 
22dear-llama
Aww! That was sweet. At the beginning I thought this story wasn't going to end happily, haha. I like how you gave it time for Maurice to re-evaluate his feelings for Letitia :) Keep it up!
22dear-llamaAww! That was sweet. At the beginning I thought this story wasn't going to end happily, haha. I like how you gave it time for Maurice to re-evaluate his feelings for Letitia :) Keep it up!
8/8/2008 c1 3Jestry
Oh man; the beginning made me kind of sad.
But I'm glad everyone turned out to be okay, and happy, and it all worked out. (:
3JestryOh man; the beginning made me kind of sad.
But I'm glad everyone turned out to be okay, and happy, and it all worked out. (:
3/11/2008 c1 Evenstar1389
lol you had me going for a moment there, i really believed that he meant the kiss for Priscilla. But how do you explain the beginning where Maurice was surprised and ended up half a meter away from her? =S It sounds like you changed paths halfway through the story..
lol you had me going for a moment there, i really believed that he meant the kiss for Priscilla. But how do you explain the beginning where Maurice was surprised and ended up half a meter away from her? =S It sounds like you changed paths halfway through the story..
1/22/2008 c1 4GrannyP
This story was great! I was captivated the whole time, and I couldn't look away from my screen! Very very cute!
4GrannyPThis story was great! I was captivated the whole time, and I couldn't look away from my screen! Very very cute!
1/14/2008 c1 Elevator Passenger
This writing was very sweet and easy to read. The plot was quite predictable, but I liked that you put the twist right at the beggining. Things seem believeable enough, but a tad rushed with Maurice realizing he actually likes Let as well. Keep writing.
This writing was very sweet and easy to read. The plot was quite predictable, but I liked that you put the twist right at the beggining. Things seem believeable enough, but a tad rushed with Maurice realizing he actually likes Let as well. Keep writing.
1/4/2008 c1 1leslienicolespeaks
this one is way cute. i like how he finds himself interested in her after the accidental kiss.
1leslienicolespeaksthis one is way cute. i like how he finds himself interested in her after the accidental kiss.