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8/17/2008 c1 103Jesse the Storyteller
I liked your other works better. This one seemed kind of scrambled together at the last second, not so thought out as the others. Some lines do stand out as amazing, such as "It's so goddamn hard to be brave these days" and "talking only in vowels" - both bring to mind situations and feelings... excellent job. Your word choices are fantastic.

-Jesse

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2/12/2008 c1 69this is britt
I really forgot how good of a poet you are. if it was possible for me to forget- just the diction, it's all fabulous. the way you poise the words. ah, damn.
1/8/2008 c1 91fairytale failure
This poem is challenging for the reader - it is unclear what is really happening, but the imagery is detailed and the emotion is obvious. I like the question that you ended with.
1/4/2008 c1 4windy girl
I like it. I'm pretty sure that I don't get it all, but it seems like you know. One of those I-know-but-I'm-not-telling kind of things. That's neat, to me.

-max
1/4/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
very powerful piece.. i really love the question at the end
1/3/2008 c1 31Lurid Black
Sweet... different from other poems... I like this.. keep writing!

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