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4/13/2008 c1 Deli
heartbreking. ur very good at wat u do.

best of the whole lot
1/29/2008 c1 SnackySnackSnackSnackSnack
It's good, spells something, AND rhymes. Nice. =o
1/19/2008 c1 20Twilight Starr
Fantastic job expressing yourself. Nice work.

Thanks for your review of "Places I Thought I Would Never Go". I really appreciate it.

Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~
1/14/2008 c1 43lookin4nemo
wow this is really good...ur peoms are amazing..keep it up!
1/14/2008 c1 95XxXKristie MarieXxX
This is the first time i've seen this. I loved the poem and the messege in bold. Great work. Adding to favs!

Kristie Marie
1/10/2008 c1 review
creative, well thought-out.

the general idea is pretty simple, but the structure is what really makes this stand out.

bravo.
1/10/2008 c1 165softer side of apples
I LOVE YOUR EXPRESSIONS IN THIS POEM... GREAT READ!
1/9/2008 c1 26killer syntax
There is nothing I love more than poems with hidden (or not so hidden) alternate meanings, and this one even rhymes! Except one thing:

E asy if you see it in a new light.

kinda threw that part off for me, it's longer than any other line (save for the last one) and it just...interrupts the flow. That's the only tiny thing, but overall this is another outstanding piece.
1/9/2008 c1 32Dreaming Chica
Absoultly fantastic! not only is it a well written poem, but i love how the first letter of each line spells " I don't want to see you go"

So brilliant!

♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
1/8/2008 c1 2C Pierre
this cool.very cool. must say i have heard about poems like these but this is the first i have seen it written
1/6/2008 c1 anon00
Wow! This is so beautifully written, and clever, you've obviously got a lot of talent, and your expression is great :)
1/5/2008 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Excellent use of form. With emotionally specific thoughts. I like how you've manuevered the sound in places to create some progression twists. Great form work.
1/5/2008 c1 29Inadvertentbeing
i cried. Its beautiful.
1/5/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
I love how you spell it out... the piece is beautiful and well done
1/5/2008 c1 82Billie.Joelle
WOW! once again, amazing. good job.
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