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1/7/2008 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
While this perhaps isn't the most original of pieces, I do like some parts. For example, I like how the flow and rhythm are very old-fashioned. There's a good bounce to it. Also, the rhymes aren't particularly awkward and flow very smoothly, which is both impressive and enjoyable to read. I do think that if you wrote so well about something so... I don't know, common, I suppose... you'd probably create something much better out of original stock, but this is good as well.

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