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12/28/2009 c1 173Little girl Big world
This is good & very unique. Well done :)
1/20/2008 c1 91fairytale failure
I love the idea in this, the way you write so the reader will think this person is speaking to you, and then let us see what's really happening in the end. I like the conversational tone, but the second stanza is a little hard to follow.
1/7/2008 c1 21akaSummer
Ohmygosh. I love this one a lot! It gets you really excited, then it shoves you down onto scratchy cement on hands and knees. Love it love it love it. Keep it up, definitely!
1/5/2008 c1 2Imaginary Strangers
I liked this little glimpse into this story being played everywhere. Because I think in a way it's happened to everyone. Great job.
1/5/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
I like the ending.. I wasnt expecting it.. the whole idea of happiness transmitting is really great
1/5/2008 c1 1FoxStorm
bittersweet
1/5/2008 c1 7it's june
Wow, this poem is really heartbreaking. The last line was definitely my favourite - it concluded everything in a surprising and effective way. I really like how the emotions related to your poem are implied rather than thrown at your face in a clich├ęd, overly emotional manner.

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