for Stories1/20/2008 c1 
91fairytale failure
I love the idea in this, the way you write so the reader will think this person is speaking to you, and then let us see what's really happening in the end. I like the conversational tone, but the second stanza is a little hard to follow.
91fairytale failureI love the idea in this, the way you write so the reader will think this person is speaking to you, and then let us see what's really happening in the end. I like the conversational tone, but the second stanza is a little hard to follow.
1/7/2008 c1 21akaSummer
Ohmygosh. I love this one a lot! It gets you really excited, then it shoves you down onto scratchy cement on hands and knees. Love it love it love it. Keep it up, definitely!
21akaSummerOhmygosh. I love this one a lot! It gets you really excited, then it shoves you down onto scratchy cement on hands and knees. Love it love it love it. Keep it up, definitely!
1/5/2008 c1 2Imaginary Strangers
I liked this little glimpse into this story being played everywhere. Because I think in a way it's happened to everyone. Great job.
2Imaginary StrangersI liked this little glimpse into this story being played everywhere. Because I think in a way it's happened to everyone. Great job.
1/5/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
I like the ending.. I wasnt expecting it.. the whole idea of happiness transmitting is really great
612simpleplan13I like the ending.. I wasnt expecting it.. the whole idea of happiness transmitting is really great