for do not linger10/26/2011 c1 
8Dark Blue Lover
I kind of like this. Somehow depressing, but there's a great thought behind it... like, even humans are predetermined (first thought) or dominated by nature (second thought, and I'm probably just thinking too much about it).
Good work :)
8Dark Blue LoverI kind of like this. Somehow depressing, but there's a great thought behind it... like, even humans are predetermined (first thought) or dominated by nature (second thought, and I'm probably just thinking too much about it).
Good work :)
8/15/2009 c1 1tonight we bloom
i'm speechless. this is soo beautiful and so true. great work.
I would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
1tonight we bloomi'm speechless. this is soo beautiful and so true. great work.
I would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
8/14/2009 c1 CCPerson
AWESOME! I love it! I just think they're should be uppercase in it,
AWESOME! I love it! I just think they're should be uppercase in it,
8/27/2008 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Oh, wow, that is perfect. I hope to see something from you soon. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesOh, wow, that is perfect. I hope to see something from you soon. Keep writing! :)
8/14/2008 c1 4Anesther
I liked it however; it appealed to me as "ironic", and reading such things is almost my forte.
Nice work.
4AnestherI liked it however; it appealed to me as "ironic", and reading such things is almost my forte.
Nice work.
7/18/2008 c1 166Laura Schiller
It sound like a reply to something that was said to you, but that makes it a bit confusing since we don't know what they said. However I can make a guess.
"Bent at the wind's mercy"...
Interesting.
166Laura SchillerIt sound like a reply to something that was said to you, but that makes it a bit confusing since we don't know what they said. However I can make a guess.
"Bent at the wind's mercy"...
Interesting.
3/5/2008 c1 5NicolettexMarie
I really love this. It's very true to life, in a lot of ways. Great work. :D
5NicolettexMarieI really love this. It's very true to life, in a lot of ways. Great work. :D
2/4/2008 c1 3KnittingKneedle
Hi,
Love this, it reads very well rythmically and like people have said before you have a real skill for fitting a wealth of opinions and idealisms into just a few words!
You have a lot of amazing poems!
Keep writing!
3KnittingKneedleHi,
Love this, it reads very well rythmically and like people have said before you have a real skill for fitting a wealth of opinions and idealisms into just a few words!
You have a lot of amazing poems!
Keep writing!
1/23/2008 c1 10on the line
I don't think you should delete this - you've managed to convey such an idea in so few words, and the metaphor is just brilliant.
10on the lineI don't think you should delete this - you've managed to convey such an idea in so few words, and the metaphor is just brilliant.
1/5/2008 c1 half-sketched.staccatos
konban wa
I wasn't going to log in, but I had to in order to add it to my favorite story list. :) Brilliant work. Sheer genius.
Sorry for the crappy review - exhausted beyond my own comprehension right now...
Gute nacht
-Shan-
*adds to favs*
konban wa
I wasn't going to log in, but I had to in order to add it to my favorite story list. :) Brilliant work. Sheer genius.
Sorry for the crappy review - exhausted beyond my own comprehension right now...
Gute nacht
-Shan-
*adds to favs*