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1/12/2008 c2 9Stahlut
and I love it even more. hm. hey I thought this chapter was awesome, a great set up of things to come, I loved it, and cannot wait for more.
1/12/2008 c2 3emotionless-stares
So Jesse and Michael are friends huh? At least..I think. Hm..So, Jesse is a coldhearted guy and Naomi is shy. Can't wait to read more about their interaction. Update soon!
1/12/2008 c2 jujube
gr8 beginning hope ull update soon^^
1/6/2008 c1 27A.F Lanley
That was a great prolouge for a story, but even more, the poem was exeptional.
1/6/2008 c1 9Whitney Carter
Really interesting. I especially like the cold regard with which you described Jesse because it’s so intriguing when one considers that he’s obviously a primary character. I look forward to future chapters.
1/6/2008 c1 3emotionless-stares
Wow, the poem was really profound..This Jesse person is going to be one of the main characters eh? This looks like a really good start. Update soon! I want to know how the girl falls in love with him and other things lol
1/6/2008 c1 9Stahlut
oh I hope to read more soon.

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